I read this a long long time ago. Just reread it today. Once again — The half-sibling part was unnecessary. But I think that the Author also felt the same. Maybe that's why they had a long hiatus at the time and turned the half-sibling part into a lie in the end. In the end it was good. Would've liked some kids. Maybe. (=・ω・=)
It had everything to be good. A nice premise, gorgeous art holy shit, green flag seme, tough uke.
But the story just… didn’t do anything? It fell flat. It felt like the author wanted to put everything in all at once but couldn’t come up with the justification for things. Like, he loves the uke but we don’t know why? And then the reveal that they’re brothers that lasted for 1 chapter, that doesn’t do anything other than letting us know the seme knows the mother. And the backstory arent explained at all? why?
Phenomenal art style tho, I’m obsessed. I hope the author has other works.
too many things happening at once, like wtf is going on. first they are brothers, then they're not, and he's an excommunite for killing a person, but he didnt die so that doesnt make him an excommunite or whatever. and who in their right mind accepts a job while he's already in a gang?
me: yas my two fave genres are present also me: why u gotta be freaking step brothers then me again: oh so that was not the case TFG
u got me feeling like I'm riding a roller coaster huh LMAO tho I want some more and Masami-san shooting that mf was really satisfying yet unexpected (never let them know your next move) hihihi
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I read this a long long time ago. Just reread it today. Once again — The half-sibling part was unnecessary. But I think that the Author also felt the same. Maybe that's why they had a long hiatus at the time and turned the half-sibling part into a lie in the end.
In the end it was good. Would've liked some kids. Maybe.
(=・ω・=)
that random ass brother plot line and the fast pacing at the end ruined this one for me hahh
Why whyyy whhhyyy WE WERE ALL ROOTING FOR YOU! HOW DARE YOU
Ooooo jumpscare
scared me there for a sec...
It had everything to be good. A nice premise, gorgeous art holy shit, green flag seme, tough uke.
But the story just… didn’t do anything? It fell flat. It felt like the author wanted to put everything in all at once but couldn’t come up with the justification for things. Like, he loves the uke but we don’t know why? And then the reveal that they’re brothers that lasted for 1 chapter, that doesn’t do anything other than letting us know the seme knows the mother. And the backstory arent explained at all? why?
Phenomenal art style tho, I’m obsessed. I hope the author has other works.
The author really went oops with that incest jumpscare
It's like when you have a great time reading a yaoi, then the manly seme says "Oh, I'm 17 by the way". This site is too risky for my nerves
so basically Mortal Instruments: City of Bones
too many things happening at once, like wtf is going on. first they are brothers, then they're not, and he's an excommunite for killing a person, but he didnt die so that doesnt make him an excommunite or whatever. and who in their right mind accepts a job while he's already in a gang?
literally why didn't he just rat Akira out when he turned himself in. is he stupid?
me: yas my two fave genres are present
also me: why u gotta be freaking step brothers
then me again: oh so that was not the case TFG
u got me feeling like I'm riding a roller coaster huh LMAO tho I want some more and Masami-san shooting that mf was really satisfying yet unexpected (never let them know your next move) hihihi
LMAOOOOO I went through the same emotions