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I posted the fanfic I was talking about earlier. Although, now it’s more like an inspired work instead of an actual fanfic. I’m kinda new at this so beware that my writing isn’t the best. All and any feedback is welcomed. Here’s the link https://archiveofourown.org/works/27111535/chapters/66206072

Took this question down before but I’m putting it back up after I got resurge in confidence. Would anyone be interested in reading my Rashta x Navier fanfic.