BL Plot isn’t compelling/Need readers suggestions
In the past, I’ve written many stories for sites like Wattpad, but as an art student I want to take my stories to the next level. Because this is more work than a traditional novel, I don’t want to make any mistakes on the plot. Currently, I’m aiming for character development. Some plot lines I’ve written involve Fantasy, crime and mystery, but all centered on a romantic relationship.
Could you share what are some of the greatest aspects of your favorite BLs so far.
I mean, characters or plot development, the art style or the way the story was formatted, the roles of the relationship, how much the engaged in sensual acts, favorite scenes, what annoys you, what you wish you saw more.
Literally anything works!
I can also be contacted on twitter @hobleehobi
I’m looking for proofreaders or general readers who I would review the chapters ahead of time and give me feedback as I go along.
Thank you for any replies!
Well, I'm not proficient with writing at all so Imma just say what I think is important.
- Propelling factor. Nobody would try to overcome their short-comings if there's no need or a push. Usually it comes in form of a good rival or villain, traumatic past that makes you wanna uphold justice, power of friendship/love bla bla. I personally like "se......
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11 06,2020
