First piece after an art block that lasted a whole year

Nico Nico 2025-03-13 06:45:29 About question


Critique would be nice

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sH9 March 13, 2025 5:17 pm

first, bravo, hope you liked doing it and don't put pressure on yourself. second, I am an amateur and draw rarely, I also have almost never done digital arts. Now that that's out of the way, here are my personal opinions: the overall feel is nice, I find the pink and green vibe interesting, I like the overall shape and feel of the background, I like that there aren't too many colours. If I look for things I like less, for me it'd be that the eyes seem to have slightly different shapes, that the tatoo seems blurred, and I don't know if I actually like or don't like the way the hair mixes red and purple (I keep changing my mind do I like that or not)

Mini March 13, 2025 7:55 am

Super gorgeous, I love the hair texture and the way it looks

Jay_Me10 March 13, 2025 7:55 am

WOAHHHH IT LOOKS AWESOME

I love her bold red colors which draw your attention to her, and how the sakura in the background let your eyes wander, and finally completed with a late afternoon sky, one that I love to look at because it starts to turn pink and purple! (I don't know if you did that on purpose but it looks absolutely fabulous)
Honestly it looks gorgeous and I wouldn't change a thing if I drew this (if only I had talent guy... I swear) but try to define the background more in subtle ways? not enough for them to steal the attention of the hot lady if front but maybe create some leaves, or draw out what's happening in the gray brown areas. I love how you used red and green to compliment each other and the sparkles are so iconic on her dress!

seayoonie March 13, 2025 7:54 am

incredibly beautiful art, like seriously.
i’d adjust the depth. i’ve heard that the closer to the sky, the lighter the color. the further the object, the less clearly you can see it. maybe a few defined aspects of the trees closest to the character. i’m totally awful with words ;;-;; genuinely, you’ve done wonderfully.

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