awful lines in fics youve read

any smut scenes that heavily rely on quoted moans: "ah, ah..... AHHHHH!" or "hnnggg I'M COMINGGGGGG" or "oh god, oh go-ahh, yes, yes, right there omg hng, ah-ah-ahhh" like damn man.. just describe it in one line, no need to quote the moans too. fuck that shit is embarrassing to read.   1 reply

The classic "His eyes darkened" (we are all guilty of using it)   1 reply

wattpad bnhaxy/n that is all that needs to be said.   reply

just read this bullshit.   reply

Not a cringe like but I read a very diabolical line where someone shouted to Harry "I'm whomping my willow thinking about u" (which of course refers to the three) but the line was so crazy, I had my jaw down the entire time   reply

2 many. I think da trauma has blocked it all out atp (⊙…⊙ )   reply