What yall think about the love is an illusion side story?

Im talking about their child, byul part. i never read the love is an illusion story but it seems to me their baby story seems interesting and i hope to god the author improved on their story. I always look forward to these famous BLs new works to see if they improved but with the Jinx the writing slighlty improved but its still crap cus of the ML but interesting trope with boxer x massager (forgot what u call him in english) its something new though wish the author took it in a different way.