1. No giant ass body parts (boobs/ass) like idc how well written the series is, if one character there has a massive boobs even though she's in highschool I'm dropping that shit immediately.
2. When it comes to smutty stories, make it a PLOT WITH PORN. I don't need it every damn chapter. I need the damn plot too.
3. For the love of God give the pr......
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