Does it look done?

the rider the rider 2023-12-02 04:49:16 About drawing
Ive been drawing this shit for 12 hrs i dont fucking know why it looks half-finished, should i render it more? Is it the lineart? Or is the face goofy lookin? Mf is struggling out here.

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gupunk December 2, 2023 3:55 pm

Bitch you ate this up omg i love the lighting

toji's_third_ballsack December 2, 2023 4:55 pm

Nah, it still looks kinda shit but thank you though, i appreciate it homie

gyarucorpse December 2, 2023 6:18 am

atleast it isnt the copy and paste jelly tiktok art style, eitherway it looks great keep it up

toji's_third_ballsack December 2, 2023 6:22 am

Damn, what's wrong with the jelly artstyle tiktok thingy? i havent seen it

gyarucorpse December 2, 2023 6:26 am
Damn, what's wrong with the jelly artstyle tiktok thingy? i havent seen it toji's_third_ballsack

controversial and overused, its cute but it has 0 personality to it

rey December 2, 2023 6:00 am

I think it looks really good so far. it might help to sharpen the edges of the light source on his clothes, make it more defined. I think the airbrushed look dims the contrast that the light should/could bring, it would help make the lighting pop a lot more as it's a really interesting/attention grabbing portion of the piece. I really love the rendering on his face!

toji's_third_ballsack December 2, 2023 6:10 am

I always forget to add details on other areas especially on the clothes, it's been a struggle of mine. Thank you for this!

ankle devotee December 2, 2023 5:56 am

I would say add more detail to the background and the hand, compared to the beautifully rendered face and portrait, it just looks out of place.

toji's_third_ballsack December 2, 2023 5:58 am

Damn, so yall can tell i obssessed over his face lmao thank youuuu

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