Room for improvement?

Was just roleplaying with my friend but then the writer in me suddenly came out and wrote a whole paragraph
It was completely unintentional and I was shocked by how long it was lol
But since I've made it this far, do you think I can improve this farther? I'll use it as reference for later works (I write as a hobby but I'm currently trying to write a story for my own viewing :3)

Here it is:
She stayed silent. Only ever looking at him coldly— eyes, devoid of any previous hope or love she had for the man. Now, he was but a stranger; a stranger whom she used to care for.

The only thing she feels for him now is frustration, pain, and anger: frustration at the fact the man had the complete and utter audacity to come crawling back to her, looking as if he were an abandoned dog, left to die on the streets—