BL Plot isn’t compelling/ need readers input
In the past, I’ve written many stories for sites like Wattpad, but as an art student I want to take my stories to the next level. Because this is more work than a traditional novel, I don’t want to make any mistakes on the plot. Currently, I’m aiming for character development. Some plot lines I’ve written involve Fantasy, crime and mystery, but all centered on a romantic relationship.
Could you share what are some of the greatest aspects of your favorite BLs so far.
I mean, characters or plot development, the art style or the way the story was formatted, the roles of the relationship, how much the engaged in sensual acts, favorite scenes, what annoys you, what you wish you saw more.
Literally anything works!
I can also be contacted on twitter @hobleehobi
I’m looking for proofreaders or general readers who I would review the chapters ahead of time and give me feedback as I go along.
Thank you for any replies!
Finding a good pace, make sure you give answers the readers are supposed to want to find out past, secret, etc Some stories may end up rushed or dragged out. With this character development to to events that occur, cause trauma or past issues don't poof away...Just my two cents on what to look out for,(btw I love slow pace) Best of luck in your eff......
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26 12,2019