I need tips for making a better bl romance

I need your tips for making a better bl romance it can be drama! Currently I'm making a gl romance but when I'm done making a gl romance I'm going to make a bl after that a shoujo-.. so I created this story and yes it's a little weird- it's kinda similar to omegaverse but it's a little different ... the story is about a cursed gem ( forgive me if I'm bad at writing ) the cursed gem activates if you say badly to a woman.. so when you say badly to a woman like example; hurting the woman feelings or physical hurting them (spoiler the uke didn't hit his sister but he said something hurtful to his sister ) The cursed will activate!!
the sign of the curse is having a gem in your body like having a gem in your neck! It activates anytime anywhere. The way to get rid of the curse is to apologize to the woman you hurt! And the curse is not becoming a girl and not become a monster but to give birth- ( it's a weird cursed I know ) the cursed is already passed down through generations but it only happened one time and now everyone thinks it's a myth and the cursed activates again! And I need tips or help! And I want your opinions!
The first seme isn't a rapist and abusive ofcourse same goes for the second seme...... and I won't make the uke short but I want the uke to be an ordinary guy #－.－)
SPOILERS:
The uke had 4 kids 2 beautiful daughters UWUS and the other 2 is a mystery :)))))))) AND OFCOURSE I WILL MAKE A STORY OF THE 2 BEAUTIFUL DAUGHTERS THEY'RE ARE MY FAVORITE CHARACTERS :DDDD

And I'm thinking of a title so also help me with the title and... if you see a bl comic like this it's probably mine :)
PLEASE READ MY COMICSS IN THE FUTURE PLEASEEEEEEE I WILL MAKE IT FREE but I need money though you can donate if you want me to continue BUT PLEASEEEEE ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄