Need Readers Help with BL Plot
In the past, I’ve written many stories for sites like Wattpad, but as an art student I want to take my stories to the next level. Because this is more work than a traditional novel, I don’t want to make any mistakes on the plot. Currently, I’m aiming for character development. Some plot lines I’ve written involve Fantasy, crime and mystery, but all centered on a romantic relationship.
Could you share what are some of the greatest aspects of your favorite BLs so far.
I mean, characters or plot development, the art style or the way the story was formatted, the roles of the relationship, how much the engaged in sensual acts, favorite scenes, what annoys you, what you wish you saw more.
Literally anything works!
I can also be contacted on twitter @hobleehobi
I’m looking for proofreaders or general readers who I would review the chapters ahead of time and give me feedback as I go along.
Thank you for any replies!
I always appreciate anything that firstly has sound internal logic-- that everything makes sense & is logical in plot & characters. I think this also ties into being realistic. For example, in the comic Paramour, two male characters are in their twenties but don't work or do anything of importance that normal adults would do. It felt ridiculous to ......
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28 11,2019
Personally, I like slow development in the characters relationship, I just like when the characters meet and they are basically strangers one of them help the other in something, they meet many times after that, they see the good side and the bad side of each other, then they develop some feelings to each other without knowing and then some situati......
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28 11,2019
I’m a big sucker for accidental confessions in the middle of an argument
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28 11,2019
To answer your question my favorite bls basically consisted of the character having a bit of an age gap the seme being older and the uke being younger. The plot development that i usually would like is the seme realizing his feelings toward the uke and acting protective over them(kind of nonchalant) while the uke is aware of the feelings towards th......
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28 11,2019
Hi! I went to film school so I get wanting to be more professional ^^ I love writing stories.
As for what I’m looking for in a yaoi manga, I like an appealing art style and good character development. Giving a character a unique or interesting back story can add a lot of depth to the overall plot. Of course, the art style doesn’t always matter......
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28 11,2019
I'd say the stories that I tend to go back and re-read are the ones with realistic character and story development. Slow burns. I like a build up to the romantic/sex scenes through plot/character development because when they finally happen they tend to be so much more satisfying rather than stories that are sex scene after sex scene with little ......
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29 11,2019
