I just honestly need someone to revise a letter that's due tomorrow. Simple critique on grammar and word choice is very appreciated. I have no friends to ask this favour pls help-
I think "I've started battling the Spanish Armada since a few days ago, second in command leading the English fleet." " Though I was only knighted 11 years ago and have yet to fulfill my duties for my country, my circumnavigation of the globe have got me to where I am currently. I remember on my hardships from before my great success. Losing my crew mates and facing the harsh weather, how could forget?" "If I come back, I wish to be spared from any more duties for some time so to see you again for longer and be able to stay in Plymouth for longer as well." I hope these are helpful for you, good luck.
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I think "I've started battling the Spanish Armada since a few days ago, second in command leading the English fleet." " Though I was only knighted 11 years ago and have yet to fulfill my duties for my country, my circumnavigation of the globe have got me to where I am currently. I remember on my hardships from before my great success. Losing my crew mates and facing the harsh weather, how could forget?" "If I come back, I wish to be spared from any more duties for some time so to see you again for longer and be able to stay in Plymouth for longer as well." I hope these are helpful for you, good luck.
Oh that actually sounds way better thank you so much :D
I don’t think there are any grammar errors, you should be good.
Thank you so muchhhhh I really appreciate it :)))