Wrote a BL love scene

Yoshi Yoshi 2018-12-01 03:13:50 About write a book
(Story included)

I be always wanted to write a book but have been to lazy . Recently though I’ve written clips or scenes and thought I might share it and get your opinions.

This one was a Vampire (uke) x Werewolf (seme)

VxW version scene 1 idea

He kisses me passionately on my lips , his tongue entangled mine in a fight for dominance.

His hands gripping my hair making me let out a small moan in his mouth. “Mhnnn”

His breathing hitches when he hears me moan , I could tell it turned him on , his bulge straining against his pants . My condition was no better with pre cum already wetting my underwear.

I was drunk on the pleasure , I wanted more , and fast . I jump on him , his strong arms ripped with smooth muscles easily catches ahold of my ass and he lifts me up to his waist , my feet around him .

“baby , where is your bedroom “ I manage to get an answer through all the kisses and step by step I feel him moving .

The bedroom door opens with a bang and before I know it I was thrown onto the bed , “ where’s the lube ?“ castel says with his deep husky voice. It sends shivers down my spine .

“ First drawer on the left “ as soon as the words leave my mouth he rushes and gets the bottle .

“ On all fours “ he commands , I can’t stop my body from following his command . Slowly I get into this shameful position , my ass hanging up in the air .

He forcefully pulls my underwear down exposing my round ass into the open .

“Siiii” I can hear him taking a breath in , I can feel how horny he is for me .

The cold and slimy lube is squeezed onto my butthole . Castel brings his finger and starts to spread it around slowly sinking a finger into my hole .

“Mmmm” he goes in deeper and deeper until it reaches the end of his finger and then he pulls out again halfway , he plays with my ass however he wants , teasing me relentlessly.

One finger.....two fingers.... slowly he pushes them in and slowly he pulls them out , he does this until my hole is used to having something in it .

Castel suddenly touches a spot that sends twitches throughout my entire body . “Ahhh , no , stop what was that that “ I ask as panic sets in .

“That , my love , was your prostate . “ was all he answered back before he started his bombardment of attack’s on that spot inside of me .

“Ahhh” , “ mmmmmm” , “ Mnnnmm” moan after moan escape my mouth and just as I explode , I feel a sharp pain in my ass . This jerk had entered me when I was at my peak .

“Very smooth , you ass “ i say with disdain .

He chuckles , “ yes , your ass is very smooth “

Before I can retort to any of that I feel a tightening around my penis , a hand grabs it and strokes up and down with slow agonizing speed .

Slowly he stats moving , taking turns , a thrust in the ass , then a stroke up my shaft . The pain and pleasure mix together sending shockwaves though my body .

His pace slowly becomes faster , his cravings showing though , I had Long lost my mind but he kept bombarding me with sweet nothings .

“ baby , your so sexy “

“ this feels so good “

“ I love you , baby “

I lost count of how many times I had come . My sperm colored the sheets white . His thrusts became faster and I could feel our release about to come

“Together , baby “ he whispers into my ears , and the moment of my final climax I sink my fangs into his shoulder , drinking this heaven defying liquid .
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Castel , with sweat dropping down his back , growls and bites the back of my neck .

“ mine “ his claim was the last thing I heard before everything blurred

The End . Please tell me what you think . ┗( T﹏T )┛

Messages

Anonym2003 July 12, 2020 9:43 am

Give it a plot and the rest of the story and you’ll gain your first fan:D
I see a potential for this to grow into something really fantastic. You have a fair and amazing play with words and the hole erotic thing is already into its place. Give it a try and if you make a development on this, be sure to tell me! I’d like to see it:D

Anczar December 1, 2018 5:33 am

Erotic enough to make me slaps my pillow furiously

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