I would say to put more emphasis on the emotions displayed by the character itself. Upturn the eyes a little more so that it gives a more cat-eye sort of look and put more eyeliner with a wing to give it a heavier, sassier, look. Then the eyebrows could be shaped in a way to look more angry. The mouth.... just make it look a little more like a frown or something?? As for body proportions, I think that the left arm (the non-raised one) is way too small and short compared to the latter. Both arms are quite thin, maybe add a little more meat to it. Then color it and let's see :DD
So when you say the arm is too short does that mean the other arm is too long or is it okay? Should i try and make the other arm a little shorter and the other arm a little longer so their both equal?
Are you asking for a critique? The hands and arms are out of proportion(too thin). The body is okay but the neck is on an awkward position(or maybe its just the hair making it look that way). The face is fine but I guess it doesn’t give off the same vibe bc of the eyebrows and the eyes(eyelids). If you’re aiming for that mean look then I suggest adding the heavy eyeliner and lashes and making the eyebrows more curved. Overall I think it’s a good sketch! I wanna see the colored version <3
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I would say to put more emphasis on the emotions displayed by the character itself. Upturn the eyes a little more so that it gives a more cat-eye sort of look and put more eyeliner with a wing to give it a heavier, sassier, look. Then the eyebrows could be shaped in a way to look more angry. The mouth.... just make it look a little more like a frown or something?? As for body proportions, I think that the left arm (the non-raised one) is way too small and short compared to the latter. Both arms are quite thin, maybe add a little more meat to it. Then color it and let's see :DD
So when you say the arm is too short does that mean the other arm is too long or is it okay? Should i try and make the other arm a little shorter and the other arm a little longer so their both equal?
Are you asking for a critique? The hands and arms are out of proportion(too thin). The body is okay but the neck is on an awkward position(or maybe its just the hair making it look that way). The face is fine but I guess it doesn’t give off the same vibe bc of the eyebrows and the eyes(eyelids). If you’re aiming for that mean look then I suggest adding the heavy eyeliner and lashes and making the eyebrows more curved. Overall I think it’s a good sketch! I wanna see the colored version <3
Thanks you actually gave a good critique lol because while i was sketching i thought the arms looked too thin. Ill use your advice ty