What do You Think about my story, Be honest!

Going to be 100% honest and brutal:
The story seems kinda cliche. It's just a revenge story, except guess what, the tyranical overlord is the one that you gotta get revenge on. This is reminding me a lot of cinder, minus the fairy-tale aspects. There's no mystery, we know who did it from the start. It seems like your average "teens doing things that no teens would ever be able to do while otherthrowing the government". There's no depth, and there's this entire thing about how robots are bad and stuff, which i mean could be interesting if you use that as a tool to talk about racial prejudice, but otherwise I just don't see the point.

The main character seems a bit young to be "avenging his lover"; most 15 year olds haven't even dated, let alone developed deep enough feelings to seek "revenge". Heck, if I'm reading this correctly, that means that he had a lover when he was 14. This means that he started dating this person at age 13 at the EARLIEST. He also seems to be extremely bland. You don't have any weaknesses or anything listed here (other than "impulsiveness", which come on, that isn't anything on his character), and he seems too much like a stereotypical good guy. Also, what's up with the scar? What happened to him? Try to add some other weaknesses that could cause some people to dislike him, and events that happen in their life that shape them as a human.

Mina is a bit better, as lazyness can be a negative trait, but overall she's just a generic side character. Nothing special. Maybe add some motivations?

Sapphire is also close to becoming a bland and boring character. She's seeming a bittt too much like a mary sue; everyone hates her for no reason despite the fact that she's literally the nicest person around, and doesn't seem to have any flaws. Only having her backstory be "she was treated like trash" when there doesn't seem to be any reason for it makes things seem unrealistic. Maybe there could be some reason why she's picked on? Is it because she's a robot? Is she from a place that has a history of robot brutality? Everyone, even the random people of a town, have to have reasons for their actions.

Ren looks pretty good, however again, mysterious hacker is still kind of cliche. Maybe add a compulsion or something to make her weird or unique? or have her hint at a tragic past? Again, needs more depth to the character.

Ok, Dion... Just saying that Kind and Bossy/Apathetic are KIND OF contradictory??? Like, they're clashing. I don't really see how this person could actually exist. And how exactly is he popular? Is it because of his kindness? His good looks? Why is he so loyal? How is he dependable? What does he bring to the table?

And where is the description of Melantha? Don't tell me she's just going to be evil and that's it? You gotta go into villian motivations and stuff man.

Characters are wayyyy too young for this situation. If you want to go down this route I'd reccommend making Elyot's motivation be something family related and not about their lover. Add more depth. Add motivations. Remember every single person, even if they're just a part of a mob, has motivations and purpose.

Like the plot itself isn't inherently bad, it's just extremely bare bones and simple and at the risk of becoming cliche. You need to add things to set it apart and make it seem like an actual world.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out.