Pls don't attack me
Ok so you might be wondering why I said pls don't attack me and it's bc I'm a girl and I want to write a story ( yes I am under the age of 18 and I am pan)
I've said before I want to write stories and stuff bc I'm making up all these plots but this certain story just happens to have the main characters be mlm
Basic Plotline if you're wondering- the two main guys are in college and get paired up for a project (one is bi and the others gay(not out)) and they eventually get closer ( one of the guys was s*#ually assaulted by someone he trusted and I guess emotionally manipulated too) but I want to showcase how one helps the other grow and overcome his trauma. (Not like over a day but like genuine growing [multiple weeks and months] since he isn't a fan of touching)
The thing is I don't want to be called a fujoshi or a fetishes bc this certain story happens to be mlm
I'm not mlm so I obviously don't know exactly how everything works so I'd obviously research if I'm writing I also wanted to show more lgbt representation in my stories bc this would have an asexual female and in another story there's a trans guy
Haven't really made any specific characters yet other than the main cast and the son of bxtch neighbor
No offense, but you could do all the "research" humanly possible and it's still not going to amount to "representation" because you're literally unable to live the experience to truly know what you're writing about. You're not going to be "representing" mlm people, you're going to be "representing" what you think mlm people are or should be like. T......
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11 02,2021
mhm it's ok I guess? you are not really fetishizing mlm
your story (personally sorry for the kinda harsh review) is that bad but still cliche but what every you want (don't let me disencrouge you hhh)
as long as it doesn't go too far hun I guess we would be fine with that have a nice day and good luck (?)
(ps maybe tell me more about this and c......
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11 02,2021
Hm? I don’t really see any reason for me to attack you? For me, sounds like a general BL plot. Although, I’m only taking this lightly so don’t expect to see everyone to not attack you
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11 02,2021
sounds like a typical BL to me, you do you
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11 02,2021
I’m actually really interested, it sounds like i’d like it, cause i smell angst
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11 02,2021
ik this is a basic cliche plotline and I mean that doesn't automatically make a story bad but honestly I might change some things up as I work more with this plot idea
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11 02,2021
If the story isn't sexual or keeps out of that subject considering your a minor, that's all fine and good as it sound interesting. Although if the story goes into a sexual topic I really can't say I'd support it, because you'd be entering an +18 space and that can make a lot of people uncomfie. But otherwise you have my full support!
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11 02,2021
