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Tch, i was expecting Jesus doujinshi ( ̄へ ̄)/j   1 reply
04 09,2023
I skip the entire plot just to comment.. (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧   reply
04 09,2023
WAIT NVM SHOULD I READ THIS AND MAKE A TLDR???   reply
03 09,2023
wow.... that was actually.. really good..... I liked it a lot (▰˘◡˘▰) Good job :)))))   reply
03 11,2020
I think it was really good ,the plot is really interesting, I would totally read the continuation of this. You did a really good job.ヾ(☆▽☆)   2 reply
03 11,2020
Maybe try to quote what they say? "I'm okay, she lied. She didn't feel comfortable telling this stranger she was scared. Thank you Nikko. -Nikki! she corrected her. Call me Nikki." Into: "I'm okay." She lied, not feeling comfortable telling the stranger that she was scared. "Thank you Nikko." "Nikki. " The girl corrected her, "Call me Nikki!" ......   reply
03 11,2020
Sizt it's better if you used quotation marks to signal the dialogues cause sometimes it's hard to differentiate if it's a dialogue or not.(▰˘◡˘▰) Another thing is to pipe down some of the terminologies. Like using a complicated word for something meant to be simple ( Hemoglobin -> blood ) Like it's too technical in the setting of the sto......   reply
03 11,2020
what is a red sea?   reply
03 09,2023
Like I get that you are trying to get peoples attention, but there us no need to get blasphemous while doing so. There are many other ways to grab the attention of others without disrespecting Jesus. Well GOD bless you!!   1 reply
03 09,2023
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