Wow please don't take that person's advice. Wth is " lesbian things" ? I think you've invested well into your side characters , same sex relationships aren't an "alternative" to hetero ones but saying there's no "male counterpart" suggests exactly this. You should keep adding to their personalities as you have been ; I really like the jobs you've......   1 reply
06 07,2021
Personally, my advice is to not think about it too much. Don’t worry about making it distincly “lesbian”, but just what any relationship would be like. However, if their relationship is a secret, then it can be an interesting plot point for them to be dodging men’s advances, or something similar. Also consider the fact that it is not a here......   1 reply
06 07,2021
i am writing a primarily straight story but 2 of the side characters are lesbians who are dating each other. The dynamic was person A is a girl who is really onto fashion and stuffs like that she actually sells thrifted clothes while person B is a very intelligent art student who have a side job of being a streamer and things like that (if y'all know those cute and legit gamer girls who collects stuffs and does asmr unboxing every now and then). They're dating and most of the interactions that they have are from what I observe from my irl lesbian friends which are... normal dating interactions.

The thing is, I posted it into a private group to have some feedback about the story but a person said that they looked forced coz they don't do 'lesbian things'. I told this to my friends and they said that it's prolly because there's no depiction of 'male counterpart' in their relationship but they're not really sure about it coz they don't have it too in their relationship and now the 3 of us are confused.
06 07,2021
1, the main character settling for the second love interest or if it's gay the unpopular "top" x the popular "bottom" (some novels do this i just wish it was more common) 2, idk i suck at making plots 3, a popular mc idk 4, unpopular and shy and seems like an ass at first 5, "Here U Are' because it has that same exact troupe sorry for the ass ......   reply
02 07,2021
i write sometimes but i suck at it. so take this all with a grain of salt. this is what id like to see as a reader. :)) 1) both the MC and the love interest should have friends. friends who have their own character traits and development. 2) im a slut for the whole mutual benefit stories. like, when both are struggling with something (mental heal......   reply
02 07,2021
SHDJHFHFHHDJ thats normal i think-   reply
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