wekinn
: -The start and end of the story dont match at all, at the start it was minorly implied that our MC wld stay in the game universe yet in the end he suddenly left back to the real world??? maybe MC will go back w black hair in the side stories but ts lowk dont match up.
-Wdym MC is suddenly in love w black hair?? what??? from what ive read and rmb so far, MC pretty much didnt like black hair cuz bro went to nibble on him or smt (i dont rlly rmb). So why does he suddenly have feelings for black hair now?? like there was literally no scene that showed rhe development of MC's feelings for black hair even tho that literally is the basis of the romance genre. And lowk from what i see, black hair likes MC unnecessarily, if i were him, id merely see MC as a tool to get my shit tgt, not fall in love w him or anything, now i get that black hair met MC when he was young or smt, but that MC and the current MC now were completely 2 different ppl?? so why tf does he like MC???? shldnt he be kinda resenting MC for stealing his crush's body???
idk man this is just my take, yall are free to hve ur opinions. I js think that ts story had so much potential but yet it was all gone to waste....
Feeds
-Wdym MC is suddenly in love w black hair?? what??? from what ive read and rmb so far, MC pretty much didnt like black hair cuz bro went to nibble on him or smt (i dont rlly rmb). So why does he suddenly have feelings for black hair now?? like there was literally no scene that showed rhe development of MC's feelings for black hair even tho that literally is the basis of the romance genre. And lowk from what i see, black hair likes MC unnecessarily, if i were him, id merely see MC as a tool to get my shit tgt, not fall in love w him or anything, now i get that black hair met MC when he was young or smt, but that MC and the current MC now were completely 2 different ppl?? so why tf does he like MC???? shldnt he be kinda resenting MC for stealing his crush's body???
idk man this is just my take, yall are free to hve ur opinions. I js think that ts story had so much potential but yet it was all gone to waste....