Hokipoki
: Why did she let herself get stabbed and not a magic clone? Also what does she mean that he’s defeated? Is she going to fake marry him then actually use her clone/doll magic to look like she died while “married” to him, then return as her original position as the dukes daughter? I’m ok with spoilers!
Lingz
: I finished reading until the latest chpt, but tbh, only thing interesting about this story is the mc and his subordinates. I'm impressed by how the author utilizes mc's abilities in creative ways, and I'm invested in how f-ranks can level up. Mc also utilizes other's abilities well, like the warp gate guy.
The rest of the story however is mid at best. Other heros have really straight forward abilities like holy sword, holy barrier, transforming big and strong, have big OP tiger. Villains too, like most of the time they just summon monsters/let monsters fight for them, and their personal abilities aren't interesting either. Because of this, fight scenes can get quite boring.
The plot is also quite surface level. Good vs bad, villains vs mc. There is some plot twists here and there like a guardian becoming a villain but it's still very black and white. The villains are either fanatics or crave destruction, there's no deeper meaning behind their actions and no grey area. So far there also isn't a case where a villain becomes a good guy, seems like once a villain, forever a villain. And plot regarding the existence of the system is basically non-existent.
People might disagree with me on this, but the personalities of the characters in the story are frankly put, bland. Most of them just have one personality trait going for them, and it's very 2d. It's the definition of "making xxx their whole personality". With some exceptions, I'm not interested in any of the other characters.
And as mentioned by other commenters, wow the females in the story are both poorly drawn and written. Same face same body, 1d personality (except holy sword girl).
Finally, idk why but I don't really like the art. Objectively the proportions are generally good and the art is decent, but for me it feels really messy at times and it's very blurry to read. I think it's something to do with the colors but I'm not an artist so take my word with a grain of salt.
Nnmy
: Wheres my buff man abel?? Tho i also like this new body of his cause damn I can stare at his sleeping face alll dayy. He's so prettyyyy!! But I also want my beffy bottom gurly bear bottom abel!!
Nvm. I just want more chapters. I want to read the novel cause they said there's smut there but really!! SAMK delivered yet another masterpiece!! Gosh i truly am in love with his works!
Feeds
The rest of the story however is mid at best. Other heros have really straight forward abilities like holy sword, holy barrier, transforming big and strong, have big OP tiger. Villains too, like most of the time they just summon monsters/let monsters fight for them, and their personal abilities aren't interesting either. Because of this, fight scenes can get quite boring.
The plot is also quite surface level. Good vs bad, villains vs mc. There is some plot twists here and there like a guardian becoming a villain but it's still very black and white. The villains are either fanatics or crave destruction, there's no deeper meaning behind their actions and no grey area. So far there also isn't a case where a villain becomes a good guy, seems like once a villain, forever a villain. And plot regarding the existence of the system is basically non-existent.
People might disagree with me on this, but the personalities of the characters in the story are frankly put, bland. Most of them just have one personality trait going for them, and it's very 2d. It's the definition of "making xxx their whole personality". With some exceptions, I'm not interested in any of the other characters.
And as mentioned by other commenters, wow the females in the story are both poorly drawn and written. Same face same body, 1d personality (except holy sword girl).
Finally, idk why but I don't really like the art. Objectively the proportions are generally good and the art is decent, but for me it feels really messy at times and it's very blurry to read. I think it's something to do with the colors but I'm not an artist so take my word with a grain of salt.
Nvm. I just want more chapters. I want to read the novel cause they said there's smut there but really!! SAMK delivered yet another masterpiece!! Gosh i truly am in love with his works!