Not_yo_cheese
: I'm sorry but..... the story is so damn boring it's not even the binge read and forget about it later it's literally the no thanks kind. Everything in the story just feels like the authors favorite scenes in others stories that they just added for no reason. Yall know those touching manhwa edits? This story literally feels like a compilation of them! ...and not the good kind.
Everyone is so damn hollow, instead of a copy and paste story that has depth this story is literally copy and paste over a hollow shell. Like how do I explain this??? It's like the rock looks solid but when you touch it it's hollow??? The only thing remotely keeping the chapters together is that it's in the same story and the fl's light powers. FL is also so damn boring, like I'm not hating on her acting like a kid, infact I fully support MC's that are children acting like children, infact it would make sense since we know the FL died as a child and hasn't fully developed yet in both timelines BUT HOLLY SHIT Girl is too damn boring, it's like a ripoff of a depressed child but instead of having an actual emotionally depressed child they just have a picture of a depressed child and called it a day.
Again with the story but it's like someone hit the fast and furious instead of fast-forward, like how do you go from problem one second then all fixed after in a micro second? Problems? Instantly cleared, War? Instantly won, Hotel? Might be trivago who knows, like you literally have to blink then poof all problems solved.
Like it's definitely not the worst infact if they slowed down a bit and got into more depth with the characters and how they'd fit into the entire storyline then this would definitely be a good read, like all the characters have a story... It's just the way they tell it makes it feel empty.
Feeds
Everyone is so damn hollow, instead of a copy and paste story that has depth this story is literally copy and paste over a hollow shell. Like how do I explain this??? It's like the rock looks solid but when you touch it it's hollow??? The only thing remotely keeping the chapters together is that it's in the same story and the fl's light powers. FL is also so damn boring, like I'm not hating on her acting like a kid, infact I fully support MC's that are children acting like children, infact it would make sense since we know the FL died as a child and hasn't fully developed yet in both timelines BUT HOLLY SHIT Girl is too damn boring, it's like a ripoff of a depressed child but instead of having an actual emotionally depressed child they just have a picture of a depressed child and called it a day.
Again with the story but it's like someone hit the fast and furious instead of fast-forward, like how do you go from problem one second then all fixed after in a micro second? Problems? Instantly cleared, War? Instantly won, Hotel? Might be trivago who knows, like you literally have to blink then poof all problems solved.
Like it's definitely not the worst infact if they slowed down a bit and got into more depth with the characters and how they'd fit into the entire storyline then this would definitely be a good read, like all the characters have a story... It's just the way they tell it makes it feel empty.