icecoffee1111 : 1. love the fl cleared up a memory misunderstanding by folding immediately when the ml guessed it correctly lol
2. bro breaking pens left and right everyday son no pen safe hide the ink dude
3. kind of boring ending like lets just end the story
4. the hair thing that the tutor gave is soooo ugly like if its not a bomb im be mad bc who would gift such an ugly hair charm. the real reason she gave it to the duchess straight hideous. and like it looks like a brooch so why make it a hair piece when it could be a brooch. soo pls let it be a bomb
5. the red haired once noble now commoner is sooo hot like poverty did her right, lost weight but still has curves in alll the right placessss. her guard lover is hot tooo likee
6. the ugly hair pin givess her powers that stupid i hate it
7. so much of the dialogue in this story is soo hard to read. like it just does not sound natural at all. chp 64 the blonde empire? i think he is talking to himself and it just reads sooo bad. and the chapter where the black haired ml leaves for the journey he and the fl are talking on the bed and its just like ugghh what are yall saying like omg this conversation is soo childish
8. the witch is the best thing in this story omg look at herrrr the artist put all her talent into this character omg perfection i wish the witch was the main character like girl just wants to have fun why ppl think she the villain shes not seeking ppl out they find her
9. him gettting hurt then healed was so boring like dude was dying but it was done in a way that we knew he was gonna be saved so like it did not really bring out emotions
10. i want a gl with the winter witch the the mom now daughter sienna
11. it was fine. kind of boring but cute

XxthewandererxX : For all that big talk , you better win bro :') (i dont think he will )