Clari
: I came here expecting nothing much especially since ethis isnt my usual genre but IM SO IN LOVE WITH THE STORY IT WAS SO GOOD im defo rereading this someday :D
LeatherKitten
: Sometimes the writing feels a little bit strange, there were times when characters would say or think things that seemed contrary to already established information. Such as cow boy constantly insisting that blondie is straight, even though he knows he used to have a crush on his younger brother? Quite strange. Such instances like that made the overall flow of the story a little confusing, but I’m not sure it that can be chalked up to bad writing or just mistranslation. Either way, the story is ‘aight. The “cow thief” reveal could have been better. Who even was that guy? Don’t remember him. Anyway- not good, not horrible. If you want to kill some time with a short story, it’ll work.
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