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: fuck off mcdonalds or whatever tf ur name is
Plain potato
: Talk about amazing story potential and horrible execution. Everything from the fact she would literally fold everytime she was blackmailing him to his emotional disability is not screaming romance but just toddler play. Even the thriller plot is not well thought at all. It feels like the Author is brainstorming without story building.
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Everything from the fact she would literally fold everytime she was blackmailing him to his emotional disability is not screaming romance but just toddler play.
Even the thriller plot is not well thought at all. It feels like the Author is brainstorming without story building.
I really wanted it to be good. Sad