Karma868
: i dont appreciate them having more kids when they couldnt raise theyre first ones right
FOUND FAMILY???
: Genuinely who is this for? It's like elementary school -level writing but they just had to add the erotica part. It's so bad it's not even funny anymore whoever let a wattpad writer loose, please come and collect them
Also what kind of "poor orphan" wears luxury dresses and can indulge in high-quality wine?? And wasn't she an actress or acting major in the modern world? It seems like the bare minimum of "keeping facial expressions in check" is already too much for her.
YES WE GET IT YOU'RE SO PETITE AND HE'S SO BIG AND STRONG PLEASE LET'S MOVE ON ALREADY
The ML is a ridiculous thing like you just spent five pages talking about how tiny and fragile she is, why is the first recreational activity you propose is HORSE RIDING? The famously exhausting and dangerous one? I'm honestly concerned for the people being governed by someone who'd be outsmarted by an amoeba.
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Also what kind of "poor orphan" wears luxury dresses and can indulge in high-quality wine??
And wasn't she an actress or acting major in the modern world? It seems like the bare minimum of "keeping facial expressions in check" is already too much for her.
YES WE GET IT YOU'RE SO PETITE AND HE'S SO BIG AND STRONG PLEASE LET'S MOVE ON ALREADY
The ML is a ridiculous thing like you just spent five pages talking about how tiny and fragile she is, why is the first recreational activity you propose is HORSE RIDING? The famously exhausting and dangerous one?
I'm honestly concerned for the people being governed by someone who'd be outsmarted by an amoeba.