LongJune
: This story is a little too basic for me with some recurring characters being very flat and 2 dimensional. The guilt the ML has is kinda weird; he feels bad for abandoning the FL- so he treats her coldly but when shes gone he's like "dont ever forgive me!!" Like calm down man, she's the one who got hurt yet you spin it around to yourself FL is fine, but there isn't much to her to make her interesting. Its another basic 'beautiful, and nice, bubbly family treats me bad' but with a ~*limp leg*~ for pizzazz.
ARGHHH
: The discipline is so obedient, look how he didn't want to hurt his master
Feeds
Like calm down man, she's the one who got hurt yet you spin it around to yourself
FL is fine, but there isn't much to her to make her interesting. Its another basic 'beautiful, and nice, bubbly family treats me bad' but with a ~*limp leg*~ for pizzazz.