BetterLeftUnknown
: honestly i can see kaelus is just done with that past issue cause he's already healed
and she just want: REVEEENGE hahah
when i saw that scene happening my first thought was "maybe it was poorly executed and has poor flow of story cause i feel like it's diff from the novel" (I haven't read the novel)
checking the comments and i was right!
really tho changing the scenes slightly to shorten it to a few pages or chapters kinda changes the character themselves (in this story)
Feeds
and she just want: REVEEENGE hahah
when i saw that scene happening my first thought was "maybe it was poorly executed and has poor flow of story cause i feel like it's diff from the novel" (I haven't read the novel)
checking the comments and i was right!
really tho changing the scenes slightly to shorten it to a few pages or chapters kinda changes the character themselves (in this story)