Kai : he a vet not a rookie, he for sure can dive in that p*ssy

joy : you see… i remember reading this a long time ago and the concept is very interesting. however the execution? not so much. tbh the ending is lowkey bad and its NOT bc i was rooting for yul, i actually liked how they framed his obsession as negative. my issue is how yujin’s character development seemed illogical and it would of been so much better if he was a green flag from the start, instead of the random misogynistic fboy persona that does a 360 for no reason after meeting sian??? Now it seems like his character has no depth and makes no sense because even the character development arc isn’t given proper reason. AND i think she should of had her own character development outside of ANOTHER male character. Especially considering her trauma and everything? Perfect opportunity to make a ending about her own healing — plus it’s weird how irrelevant her female friends were in the ending and the overall story, considering the themes.

Overall; Could of been really good, ended up mid. See I can defend cliche mindless manwha reading but if a stories premise is on a complex topic, then my expectations for the execution will not be wattpad

pluto : “then you’re just jeffrey’s daughter” OH