Ethereal : listen idgaf what anyone says. I’m only on chapter 8 but I’m having to stop because of how terrible written this has been. not even just the translation, but the overall progress of the script.

She jumps back to when she first finds out she’s preggers after death and there’s barely any palpable surprise. it’s just straight to planning her escape. no shock or disbelief just straight to trying to plan a better life. then with the ger suddenly being able to see spirits, she show no surprise or shock about how she’s able to see them in this life as opposed to her previous one where she went her whole life without seeing them..

Then it’s like she claims them to be a rare phenomenon and that people are rarely able to even summon them let alone contract them but no one shows shock or confusion in the face of suddenly having her wash away the fire.

Plus??? they show no real sense of novelty at all new life or at the way new things are happening in this new life. like a whole fire breaks out that clearly didn’t happen before yet there’s no sense of suddenness, confusion, or worry about the future that’s already unfolding completely differently. like, if that’s how the first 8 chapters are, i can’t even begin to attempt to finish it. I’m sorry i really wanted to as well.

Annie : You can't just show me that god is hot af and then leave wtf