DeliberateMess
: The conflict with Sheria towards the end felt completely unnecessary. She should’ve never been given that many panels just to spew nonsense. Wasn’t it implied earlier that she’s merely the daughter of a Baron? How dare she raise her voice against both a Duchess and an Imperial Princess? If this was another story, she would've already been imprisoned or executed for doing that to the princess. Does the author even understand how hierarchy works in that era?
The story had great potential, but it was dragged down by too many unnecessary side plots and poorly executed developments. Take, for example, that one incident with the Kandel maids and staffs (Hallstein especially disappointed me) they openly disrespected Lariette by refusing to serve her properly. No matter how indignant they were, there’s no way such insubordination would’ve gone unpunished. How could they just ignore her status like that? ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
And don’t even get me started on the clumsy reveal about Doha being the illegitimate son of the Pope. That backstory felt completely thrown in. Honestly, I was convinced his biological father was going to be Reverend Avrafwhatever his name is. It would've made more sense.
Doha was supposedly the second male lead, but once his role in the chasing arc ended, the author just tossed him aside like an afterthought. Sure, he reappeared at the end to take his revenge, but even that didn’t land properly. It made zero sense how the Imperial Princess just brushed over the fact that all the high-ranking priests in the temple had suddenly disappeared. No investigation, no consequences, just... ignored. That kind of plot hole makes it hard to take the story seriously.
wonu
: lyrica you have been thinking to muchh baby
Dr-Erotica
: what the? it seems that they are a normal family before, then when did things start falling apart??
Feeds
The story had great potential, but it was dragged down by too many unnecessary side plots and poorly executed developments. Take, for example, that one incident with the Kandel maids and staffs (Hallstein especially disappointed me) they openly disrespected Lariette by refusing to serve her properly. No matter how indignant they were, there’s no way such insubordination would’ve gone unpunished. How could they just ignore her status like that? ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
And don’t even get me started on the clumsy reveal about Doha being the illegitimate son of the Pope. That backstory felt completely thrown in. Honestly, I was convinced his biological father was going to be Reverend Avrafwhatever his name is. It would've made more sense.
Doha was supposedly the second male lead, but once his role in the chasing arc ended, the author just tossed him aside like an afterthought. Sure, he reappeared at the end to take his revenge, but even that didn’t land properly. It made zero sense how the Imperial Princess just brushed over the fact that all the high-ranking priests in the temple had suddenly disappeared. No investigation, no consequences, just... ignored. That kind of plot hole makes it hard to take the story seriously.