Nakeru BL (Anthology)
Telling a story in just one chapter is really hard, making it filled with emotions yet not make it feel rushed seems borderline impossible. While most of these weren't really the best story-wise, I still enjoyed reading them, so I think it's worth it. Personally i think the first had the best pacing, it didnt feel like it tried to cram the story in one ch but seemed more like a page out of their life while actually making me feel something. The internal monologue from Kazu was a nice touch. The last story had an interesting idea but the execution definitely fell short. I also liked ch2 but I feel like it fell short too, leaving a lot unanswered, Sakura's character feels a bit unrefined, like I'm not sure what he really thinks at all. Kinda wish it had more chapters not necessarily with a good ending.
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