Quatre's manga / #One Shot(442)

Hahaha, the friend just kills me at the end when he pushes the girl back inside.

It was smut comedy

It was the English grammar that killed it for me. "yer"?? Really?? Are we doing a pirate imitation now?

Over all it was okay. I enjoyed the story itself although i didn't like the ending or the Yumi character. The ending confused me and annoyed me. How can a man who's going to prison go and interrogate him on a simple question he could have answered at that moment?!

meh

meh

It was a so-so story fulln if drama and angst, but the ending was just pure comedy

Full story: Fuuzokugurui Desu Ga Toshishita Danshi Ni Kokuraremashita (Yaoi) manga http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/fuuzokugurui_desu_ga_toshishita_danshi_ni_kokuraremashita/

It was really interesting and right when the story started to pick up speed it ended just as fast as it started. So sad.