ChipzWithAZ's manga / #unrequited love(23)

Nope. I knew I was gon be pissed off reading it, and I did it anyway -_- Without my emotions getting the best of me: It was well written. I understood the struggles of the father, of the MC, of the oprhan boy, and of the unrequited love interest. I get why the story had to go the way it did. For that reason ONLY, I tried to be impartial with my rating. With that being said, they both gon rot in hell. The father is insane, and his "son" deserves to be under the jail. You went through the same thing as this lil orphan and then you leave him to be abused because you wanted "daddy's love"; I'm glad you got hit with a bat. What kinda fuckin "mentor" are you? This spiteful fuck couldn't stand seeing a kid genuinely happy, so he left him to not only get the shit beaten out of him, but also to die in a fire. Then had the AUDACITY to think you was gon live in peace with his grieving father who hated you? RELEASE ME! The only people I actually felt bad for were the unrequited ML and the orphan boy. They deserve a happy ending away from that fauxcest shitshow. I ain't never reading this shit again, chile.

Holy Slowburn, Batman...It's cute, definitely, but that shit was long. It wasn't so much the first part, but rather the point where he finally realized he was in love that the author started really dragging out the confession.

Had I known it was gonna be dropped, I prob wouldn't have read it. It was good tho.

Damn. It was aight, but that poor kid had to wait so long

I was gonna give it 4 stars, but I gotta dock points for the love rival. We ain't need all dat

cute

That was cute. Don't really get why it's rated so lowly

That wasn't that bad. Idk why it wasn't rated higher

I'm honestly surprised. That was not only more erotic, but also deeper than I expected. The art, the dialogue, and the story. I'll admit it would have been more endearing to have it end them both saying "I love you", I can't help but understand that it actually makes more sense for the story. He clearly likes that nigga, but that nigga is fine knowing he's easy to read and can just be comfortable embarrassing him by showing him how much he loves him. P.S. ML is evil and it's kinda hot lol

That wasn't bad. I like how earnest the story was, especially with the struggle of having buried his true emotions under the guise of a joke being a plausible wrench in the development of the relationship