myaoich's manga / #writer uke(4)

that was beautiful. I mean, it's a typical plot but it just proves that eventhough our minds forget, our heart wouldn't change aaaaaa I'm jealous. I also hope uke is reassured completely because it hurts seeing him being insecure. Beautiful story.

THIS WAS GOOD OMG at first I thought it'll be just chapter of pwp but surprisingly it has plot and good story too. I'M UNSATISFIED WITH THAT ENDING THO

I was really, REALLY gonna rate this 5-stars because I sooooooooo love the art!!! The characters, esp the seme was so attractive the couple was really well-drawn! But the plot...idk. At first, it was interesting. But things went downhill in Season 2. I don't know, I just...think it would've more impact to me if they were longer. They feel a bit rushed for me. I really wanted to see Taehyuk's face, and I wanted uke to overcome his trauma of the ocean. He hasn't told the seme about his su*cide attempt and I think it would've been better if he did, even if it was in a timeskip because I know it's not that easy to tell someone things like that. I really expected more drama but there were more smuts and I actually had to skip them altho they were consensual. And that Jihyuk. Fuck him. He deserves the jail. The rape scenes almost made me throw up goddamit. Again, I really wanted to rate this 5-stars but...idk if only it was more...emphasized? Like the uke visiting Taehyuk's grave again and say something about forgiveness. I know I shouldn't be saying this, because ithe author really worked hard but it's my opinion anyway. Though, I'm happy the characters had their happy ending. And this is one of my favorites in terms of art!

OMG THIS IS SO CUTE AND SWEET I WANT MORE!!! I love how their relationship progressed wth it's one of the tropes I like. The only thing I dislike about this is that the smut is not enough!! I want an extra!! But this author doesn't have them TT