myaoich's manga / #smut(197)

that was beautiful tbh but if it was longer and had more emotions it would've been immaculate T_T Hibari's bro was so handsome pls why did he have to die anyway I think everyone found this boring or flat because it's a kinda common plot and yes it really lacked emotions but I felt them anyway I get what the story is trying to convey. I wish there was timeskip where uke is a full grown adult because he still looks like a child to me in the sex scenes ahaha *awkward* and the name of this manga...I wished it had another name instead because idk Hibari did cry ah I dunno how to properly explain it but I just...anyway I liked it so. ps why is there a certain tag under this lmao who tf

Awwww so they're finally lovers <3 they are both awkward with each other, especially uke xD it was funny like the prequel. I really love this couple uwu and seme's sis was so pretty, even those two extras MAMAMIA THAT STUDENT LOOKED LIKE TAKU FROM LOVE OR HATE I ALMOST SCREAMED but again I really love this heheheheh seme is so sweet aaaaaaa I'm jealous

uke can see red strings of fate, but when he saw that hid own string was connected to a guy, he finds way to cut it because he denies so. THIS WAS SO FLUFFY AND WHOLESOME PLEASE I WANT A BF LIKE SEME THIS WAS SO ADORABLE MY UWUS ARE BUSTED HSHSUWIEJHSHSUW WHEN HE CRIED BRO MY HEART SHATTERED TO PIECES T^T

THIS WAS WO CUTE PLS UKE IS SO CUTE I WANNA SQUEEZE HIM THO HE LOOKS GRUMPY

AAAAACK SO CUTE!!! it's like Hanahaki but this one isn't deadly so it's very light and melts me good AAAAAAAAA uke is so loyal <3 and the art is so *chef's kiss*

cute hehehe

'This is really mature.' I thought that at first three chapters but as the story goes on I get lost. I think it's good but I'm not mature enough yet or smart to understand this. It was really confusing. I will read this book again after a few years I guess but I will rate it four stars for now.

oh bruh...I kinda disliked the first story. Not because they're stepbros- I'm fine with incest stepsiblings but the love is kinda twisted, especially the seme's. He said so himself that he faked everything. Uke was just a possession to him and that shit pisses me off fuck you btch gah I hate it when people take advantage of weak ones I'm so sleepy while typing this so I just wanna say it's meh. I do feel bad for uke tho I hate his original fam for ignoring him. Kinda reminds me of Harada's style a bit. For the 2nd story, well that was quite interesting. I'm not fond of age gaps like middle-aged x young adults but it wasn't that bad. It was just...um..rushed? At least that's how I feel about it.

SOMEONE FINALLY MADE A SEPARATE BOOK!!! SHIT'S GOING DOWN AND HOT HERE BET

lmfao I feel like if I read this I'm literally going to hell