Houkago Hachimitsu
OH MY GOD I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THE 1ST CHAPTER HAHAHAHHAAH GODDAMIT THAT WAS SO EMBARRASSING WHYYYYYYYYYYYY HAHAHAHAHAHA T__________T but anyway this was really cute!! This was written like a shoujo instead of yaoi so it was cuter and sweeter than usual, esp when they exchanged photos ugh fuck that's so cute *sobs* and the misunderstandings!! Damn they're idiots xD but like the others said it would've been really great if the seme's POV was also written :< that's what's been missing, because I myself actually assumed he was only making fun of uke BUT TO THINK HE WOULD CONFESS LIKE THAT AAAAAAAAAA it reminds me of that side couple from It Started With A Lie this is really cute ughhhh TT
Hoshi to Harinezumi
cute. at first I was glad because of the consent which was fucking immaculate but I'm kinda disappointed when seme persisted on filming them having sex with uke being against the idea (I'm glad uke made him realize he was being unreasonable lel) but that aside everything is cute and good, would've been more likeable if that idea isn't in seme's head (I mean, they could've quarreled about different things dhsjskfh) and uke with his piercings
Sore wa Are da, Ai Kamo ne
LMAO the suddenness of the seme's confession got me laughing BECAUSE NO ONE CONFESSES LIKE THAT RIGHT??? LOL it was really cute and sweet but I am a bit...troubled- no, baffled? when seme confronted uke about how he feels. idk and it's weird that they did the deed after eating in 5 cafes and uke doesn't get to clean up his ass before xD this also reminds me of that yaoi manga where seme loathed being compared to his father who was also famous but he runs a small bar/resto shshsjs and maybe if this was longer or has any more extras I would've appreciated it more. but it's really cute :)))
Wakabaryou de, Kimi to
cute, but nothing new. nothing bad either, though.
Koishite kissshite kanjaitai