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If You Do Not Obey Me

Complete | Ranyou,Hishougetsu | 2017 released
2020-11-27 08:16 marked

THE ART WAS SO GOOOOOD that was my first thought when I started this book. Uke is so pretty in the early chapters and he reminds me of that boy in Ao Haru Ride aaaa he's just so damn pretty but anyway eventhough the art is pretty, the plot is a bit...meh. SPOILER: typical AO3 underground fic: young boss kidnaps an ordinary civ because he's attracted to him and forces him to stay with him and captive ends up being "protected" because he's the young boss' weakness lol. Geon was raped and abused so he ran away but he's been found by Jiheon again. Seme blackmails him and he's forced to stay with him. Uke gets a chance to destroy seme but realizes he's been toyed by seme's enemy so he changes his mind. He forgives seme and they live happily lol. To be honest, I expected this to be at least more fucked up or twisted. I almost thought Uke is gonna be with his ex in the end (though honestly it made me wanna barf ew hetero in a bl, really?) or at least stays mad at seme. sigh. I wanted to know what happened to Min :< although his last appearance implied that he was never to be seen again because of his stepfather. author has good drawing skills but I hope their plots improve soon.

Koujitsuei no Tobira

Complete | Shoowa | 2000 released

oh shit...I love yaoi that aren't just love or sex but this is a bit complex for me xD first of all, it kinda agitates me that uke is 17 when he had sex with seme (first page) and it even made it worse when they both met when uke was 13 (like the fire broke out 13 years ago and uke was 17 in the timeline so he was 3 years old) idk why it's such a bother to me when I've read other BL with uke falling in love with seme as a child or smth but yeah it still weirded me out because uke was seme's bro's 'adopted' son so doesn't it make it somehow...incest? xDDD idk so complicated but anyways I like how unique this was. The government is shit in this one, experimenting on children!! and seme's bro had to die this had potential but like the author's note said in the last page, the mid part of the story was a bit rushed tho I did understand the scenes. This was one of those stories that I'm still not mature enough to understand so maybe I'll comr bsck and read it again after some time. AND JIN OMG HE IS SO GORG PLS AND ALSO ACTUALLY SMART I AM FALLING!!! I THOUGHT SEME WAS ACTUALLY GONNA BE WITH HIM IN THE BEGINNING but it's okay lol he's a good friend.