peaches's manga / #want more!!!(60)

09/02/22 ch 4 3.5 stars things kinda just snowballed from the start but the author tried to slowly build up the chemistry from there with all those panels of bonding moments from time to time so in a way the romance wasnt at all rushed too much? but the writing lacks . if there was a bit more to the narration /pov n stuff it wouldve tied it all together nicely. but all in all shes good so far i like the read and i adore uke. art is good too. seme is sus but he's decent so hes got that going for him which is nice 3.5/5 pointers: uke who found his gf cheating with seme and seme who chased after uke when he left upon seeing that and things just developed from there edit 08/15/23 ch 7: that ending was a bit disappointing but ok

09/08/22 ch 1 plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 5 writing: 2.5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 3 overall: a sequel to Futari de Papa Hajimemashita!!!! A SEQUEL!!!!!!! and i wasnt informed!!!!!!! listen it's been MONTHS since i read the first book and i can still remember parts of it even without rereading it and that shit is rare!!!! im a forgetful bitch!!!! shes that remarkable ur honor!!! im soooo looking forward to this bc the first book was wholesome as shit!!! made me cry a bit too with uke's circumstances thats why i have an attachment to the first book. hopefully this makes a good sequel to that. gave the first 5 stars so im giving this 5 stars too !! gonna change it after the book is finished but i hope i wont need to!!

09/09/22 ch 3 plot: 3 story: 3 art: 5 writing: 3 uke: 5 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 3.5-4 skinship: 2.5 overall: another work from one of my favorite authors!!!!! and im only finding about it now!!!! why does the universe hate me !!!!!!! im sooo looking forward to this i love all this author's works i literally adore them sm . their art is one of the first ones i fell in love with and their two previous works both scored 5 stars from me. and despite this book having a simple plot i suppose since the author and their books are a sentimental fave of mine i had to amp up the score of this one to a 4. hopefully a 5 when it gets done!!! <333 06/15/23 ch 7: she endeddd awww:/ shes still a 4 and mostly bc i adore this author but overall it really is an ok read !

09/19/22 ch 5.5 plot: 4 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 3 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: shut up everyon shut thefUCK UP this was nice i honestly contemplated on giving it 4 stars rather than 5 but it gave me a whole story in just 5 chapters. 1st chapter was already really promising and despite having only 4 chapters left to complete a story it still managed to achieve it. there was drama associated with a heavy past of two young people, violence was involved, cute interactions (small and big from the main characters and even the extras), lovely romance, great art!!, nice writing... so many good qualities that checked so many boxes that it would be a waste not to give it 5 stars. i love uke n seme so much theyve been through hell yet they still managed to have a kind loving heart. couldnt be me cuz if it was me i wouldve lost my shit ages ago. anw i wanna see more of them i wanna see how much more their life will look like now that they are together and so on. just wanna repeat that i rly love the art 5/5

09/19/22 ch 5.6 4.5 stars that was adorable :((((((( the chemistry is just !!!!!! :((((((( plot is kinda funny cuz it sounds unrealistic as hell lmfao but!!! story is cute!! characters were great!!! even the extras are very likeable !!!!! i want more :( she was almost a 5 pointers: mc and ml being the only ones who are single left in their village are conned into getting married due to the age-old belief that it's to prevent disasters to come and insists that it is tradition edit 10/26/23 vol 2 ch 1: IT'S CONTINUED!!! THE MANGA GODS HEARD MY PLEAS 01/11/24 v2 ch 6: end :')

11/13/22 ch 7 plot: 3.5 story: 3.5 art: 5 writing: 2.5-3 uke: 5 seme: 3.5-4 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2 overall: i like it omg first chapter really went straight to the point of the plot no typical intro whatsoever and it works for me lol the art is cute and there may be a few plot holes here and there but they're tolerable. just an overall cute story? plot key points: competitive childhood friends that regularly makes bets about anything until the bets gradually escalated to something that further developed their relationship

11/18/22 ch 6 3.5 stars plot: 3 story: 3 art: 5 writing: 3.5 uke: 4 seme: 3.5-4 chemistry: 3 skinship: 2 overall: high school romance with good art and nice characters? sign me tf up ! i like everything so far especially uke's background story that one really ties up his character and can potentially be the root cause of their future problems which can spice up the story and their romance in the long run (or ruin it completely) cuz trust me when i say a damage done to a child sticks to them as they age. so folks , care about them kids edit 06/14/23 ch extra: omg shes continued?! we love to see it

11/18/22 ch bonus plot: 4 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5! seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 2-2.5 overall: nonononono NO NOO!!!!!! theFuck you mean completed dpnt give me thaf shit!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont want this to be complete I WANT THIS TO CONTINUE I WANT MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is the shit i live for i literally wanna inject this whole book into my veins i fuckin love this the wholesomeness is too much actually maybe even too much for me to take their chemistry is amazing the characters are TO DIE FOR the writing is really good and even the comical parts are hilarious and not forced . also shoutout to the dad!! when he thought his son was with a girl but turns out it's a boy but still managed to say "not that i care either way" while drunk !! i see u sir! we love an ally esp a parent ally<3333 key plot points: a "normie" seme and a geek uke finding their way to each other on a school club. grumpy seme gradually warms up to super nice n cute uke and things developed from there : ) <3

11/22/22 ch 14 plot: 3.5 story: 3.5-4 art: 5 writing: 3 uke: 3-4 seme: 5 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2 overall: a supposed alpha x beta story ! ive read hundreds of omegaverse books already and i kid u not even if theres a strong implication of which one is the uke/seme things can still greatly vary lmao but anyway i didnt wanna stereotype so i skipped the uke, seme, chemistry scoring categories. it obviously wont last as the story progresses bc it will hopefully uncover which is which but at the meantime i wanna commend how entertaining it has been so far !! the part in which everyone just tries to brush off and ignore the alpha&omega couple that unashamedly blurts out their personal problems in public is hilarious . also the way our mc effortlessly ignores every single situation of someone hitting on him, reminds of the manga Zettai BL ni Naru Sekai VS Zettai BL ni Naritakunai Otoko, in which the mc is aware of all the bl tendencies surrounding him and does his best to avoid being involved in all typical bl tropes lmfaooo really funny . anyhoo im looking forward to reading more of this! really wondering how things will develop for our mc. oh and also how could i forget to mention the really good art this has !!! strong 4 stars for this book edit 02/19/23 ch 28: seme's eyebrows are growing thicker by the second lmao 03/14/23 ch 34: oh my god...................... damn now idk who to pick 04/04/23 ch 39: finally gave a score to the uke n seme categories. seme rly popped off here i really like him hes very decent 05/10/23 ch 44: gaggggggg it really ended just like that? lol anw it's a really good read. short, but still nice overall<3

12/01/22 ch 7 plot: 4 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 4.5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 3.5 overall: listennnn listennnnnnnnn .....i love this. easy 5 stars..plot is good story is a healthy steady flow , every single chapter is eventful and never had a dull moment and it's so eventful i get surprised i still have a couple chapters to read like? it's good ur honor and the art!!! it's not just about how aesthetically pleasing it is to me it's the fact that there are a couple of parts were the art made perfect sense for the story and that includes even the littlest things and not to mention it was in perfect comedic timing!! made me laugh out loud multiple times. and the characters omg dont even get me started- i wont say much , at least i will try not to say much, except theyre both GREAT. to my eyes both the mcs were really flawless (/s:) the part where uke's past was opened when he was abused up to the part where he saw his ex (abuser) again and he showed signs of trauma etc, for me it was handled carefully and thoughtfully. really appreciated how the author wrapped things up in that part coming from someone who was physically abused by an ex too before. getting a bit dark here but really just wanna show my appreciation ANYWAY it's a really good read. i can note tons of things i have abt this but this supposed short book comment might turn into a novel !!!!! wanna read more of this story tho i wish it was truly incomplete but i doubt it bc there was an author's note at the end already :(((((( i hope they continue it tho cuz it's good!!! 5/5!!! key points: secret author seme who unknowingly became friends with benefits with fan uke