peaches's manga / #shitty seme(85)

plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 3 writing: 2.5 uke: 2 seme: 0 chemistry: 1.5 skinship: 0 overall: well, i guess imma have to keep reading before giving a comment bc so far it's aight edit12/03/21: ch 60 narrator: it was not "aight" 11/07/22: ch 79 i lowered uke's score 12/09/22 ch 82: minhyuk!!! my boy!!!! im rooting for u !!!!!! to hell with this author wanting uke to end up with taesung when ur literally RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!! 03/24/23 ch 91: 91 chapters.... huh. makes u think this number of chapters in that the story wouldve progressed towards something better, no? well it's still shit. starting to think this was a huge waste of time. ukes now a 2. might become lower if he continues to be the sappy idiot that the author makes him out to be

plot: 3 story: 3 art: 2-2.5 writing: 3 uke: 5 seme: 2 chemistry: 3 skinship: 0.5 overall: the art was so disappointing. everything was "too light" it started physically hurting my eyes. even on black and white mangas and webtoons there are enough shading and shadows to balance everything out but this one is just too bright all throughout. they added colors to the hair and eyes in an attempt to make their characters pop up but to no avail. the colors they added were also light it's frustrating. typing this while my head is aching. also almost dropped this at ch 14 i think bc of the inconsistencies and the way they missed several opportunities to develop the good writing they had at the beginning.... anyway im too emotionally invested in this now to let go of this lol i hope it gets better from here and i have to commend them FINALLY removing the stupid fringe/bangs of mc lmfaooooo they erased the line that separated it from his hair it took them what, 30 chapters? but im glad lmfao

plot: 1.5 story: 1.5 art: 2.5 writing: 1.5 uke: 1 seme: 0 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0.5 overall: fuck seme jesus edit 06/20/22: ch 40 like, ew lol the sex was cringey asfuUUUCKKK idk the chemistry really wasnt there luv just pure unadulterated lust lmao and sure thats fine but if i dont feel the chemistry the sex will come out as cringey to me. also, i didnt even notice the long absence of this book's updates ahahah shes that unremarkable ur honor. thank god the art makes up for it. also jesus uke STAND TF UP 09/05/22: ch 50 art is dead. shes bland. uke annoyed tf outta me . seme.. seme can fucking choke. literally bad writing with these characters and the story is slowly going down the drain. nothing to look forward to this anymore 09/15/22: ch 51 the art really is dead. ever since he was put in that room the art died like the proportion of the bed was off, colors were literally nothing aside from their hair, and movements? who even is she amiright. characters have completely gone to shit to the point that uke fucking annoyed me to no end hes just so push and pull like STAND TF UP. one min ur like 'i fucken hate u seme' the next min ur like 'omg whens he coming back' like what the Fuck? he also provokes seme and looks like a shocked pikachu face when seme actually gets provoked jfc . hes so fuckinh .. i dont even wanna say anything anymore hes more annoying than seme at this point. dropping this

plot: 2 story: 1.5 art: 4 writing: 2 uke: 3 seme: 1 chemistry: 1.5 skinship: 0.5 overall: no wtf

plot: 3 story: 2.5 art: 4 writing: 2.5 uke: 3.5 seme: 1.5 chemistry: 3 skinship: 2 overall: seme sucks seme suUUUUCKSSSS fuck him FUCK HIM

plot: 2 story: 2 art: 5!!! writing: 2 uke: 3 seme: -2 chemistry: 1 skinship: 0.5 overall: FUCK THAT SEME MOTHERFUCKER I HOPE HE DIES edit 9/17/21: paused at ch 24 i just cant take it anymore i really wanna fuckng kill seme and it's not good for my mental health and from 2 stars it became 1

plot: 1 story: 1 art: 3.5 writing: 1.5 uke: 2.5 seme: 0 chemistry: 0 skinship: 0 overall: i dont like it at all there was not a single character that i liked jesus fuck everyone in this story except maybe (and ever so slightly) the uke and the doctor who likes ten

plot: 1.5 story: 1.5 art: 3 writing: 1 uke: 2 seme: 0 chemistry: 1 skinship: 0 overall: almost dropped at ch 4 seme can go fuck himself

12/03/20 ch 8 4 stars plot: 3 story: 3 art: 5 writing: 3.5 uke: 2.5-4 seme: 0-3 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 3 overall: as usual as seen on my ratings i loooove the uke but the seme? not so much edit 10/10/21: ch 39 from 4 to 2.5/5 rating for uke. so disappointing edit 11/04/21: FUCK SEME JESUS CHRIST FUCK HIM TO FUCKINH HELL AMD BACK MF WENT FROM 2 TO -2 FUCK HIS BITCH ASS 04/16/22: s2 ch4 jesus christ.....poor uke.. legit in tears rn for him 07/25/22: s2 ch9 i truly, from the bottom of my heart, pray to god, wish upon the stars for seme to die mf is now -2M 11/23/22 s2 ch 28: this has been, by far, the best chapter yet in season 2. at least the second part of this chapter cuz the first part was, um,, we can just ignore that . anyway im legitimately so happy to see uke smiling. seme is getting better too. my negative 2M score of him is now just a 0. it's a huge progress so good for him lmao if he keeps it up he might even get a 2 . im rooting for him fr 01/19/23 s2 ch 33: awwwwwwwwwwww i did NOT expect that oMG he took the phone call WHILE he was in a meeting fU cken KlLL ME NAO that was SOsweet???????? made me raise his score to a 3 for that scene ALONE wow 08/05/24 s3 ch 23 (end): every time im reminded of the time jiwook's father gave seungeon some pocket money i tear up. this book has been a wild emotional rollercoaster ride. i started reading this in december of 2020. i've grown so attached to this. im really gonna miss this. ps. also i know i usually keep my notes short and tight rn but i liked seeing how i reacted to this book as it progressed through the years thats why im keeping them in and not updating it lol (last score sheet update was in 2023) reallyyyyy gonna miss this!bye

(rating does not include the side story) plot: 2 story: 2 art: 4 writing: 2.5 uke: 3... seme: 2 chemistry: 2 skinship: 0 overall: yikes