peaches's manga / #pretty uke(83)

plot: 3 story: 3 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 4.5 seme: 4 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2 overall: i think ive reread this three times? this was also the first ever bl i remember liking sm !!!!!

plot: 3.5 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 3.5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2 overall: i like the characters i like the friendship between the main ch and the side ch i'd also love to see a spinoff of the side chs and i love the art i also love the flow of the story and how it played out i was honestly expecting some "forced" action here given that it's an omegaverse and the summary was sus but it turned out really good. shes almost a 5 tbh

plot: 5 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4.5 overall: i dont think im in a good emotional and mental space rn to talk about how much this story actually wrecked me especially only after finishing it but i will try to get my thoughts straight. key word: try. this was an emotional masterpiece. at first i thought it was your typical omegaverse but then the story quickly moved on from the first couple (who i thought would be the main characters up until the end) to their butlers which then continued towards the end. i was a big ball of MESS. i wasnt holding onto a pillow while reading this. no, no. i was holding onto my tissue holder bc i kept crying every time a part in the story touches me. and it was what, every other page?! it could be the pms, sure, but if thats the case then every single person who claimed to cry while reading this all had pms at the same time and im pretty sure even god cant make that happen. im willing to wager my kidneys that god was one of its first readers and was so incredibly moved he shared it to his angel pals and theyve all been so emotionally wrecked that they neglected their duty of watching over the earth and now climate change is at its peak. /s: i could mention so many things that made me burst into tears like a newborn baby. a few of them would be miyauchi's childhood. when he lost his mom all he felt was guilt for thinking he was responsible for making his mom's life miserable. and that had he not been born she probably wouldnt end up in that situation. jesus christ. he was just. a. child. it hurt me so much that at the end when his past self appeared as if an intuition in helping to find ren's whereabouts i fucking lost it. that scene alone could be interpreted in different ways but i like to think that despite being finally happy and far from his past life, he still bring that version of himself with him always and that he will never forget that poor kid that shaped who he is now. another thing is miyauchi's huge appetite. i only thought of this at the end, but if you think about it it could possibly stem from his childhood when he was struggling so much in life with losing his mom. he looked so scarily thin it's obvious he was malnourished from the lack of food to eat. and now almost out of reflex he eat a lot bc he didnt have any when he was a kid. when i realized this i had to put my phone down because my eyes became so blurry that i couldnt read anything. miyauchi deserve all the happiness in this world. both him and kudou. kudou had a traumatic past as well but now he's found his solace and im very happy for him. he's the perfect person for miyauchi. he made me cry so much too. every time he got emotional about something and cries, i cry too. when he cried about being so fond of his baby, i cried too. when he cried all those times about miyauchi, i cried too. at the end when he cried as he hugged miyauchi's pregnant belly, i cried. so hard. i cant believe i typed so much sappy shit i literally wrote a whole fuckinh essay at 4am god help me i need to sleep i also need professional help whichever comes first ,, it's just..this story is an emotional roller-coaster ride fr. this story is a definite chef's kiss and the chef is definitely a michelin star chef. shes got everything ur honor shes got the beautiful story and well-written characters and not only that, she also has a happy ending. always remember to treat ur uke right bc happy uke, happy life

plot: 2.5 story: 2.5 art: 5 writing: 2.5-3 uke: 5 seme: 4 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 2 overall: i adore the uke

plot: 4 story: 3-3.5 art: 5 writing: 4.5 uke: 2-4.5 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 1 overall: man the part where their past was shown especially the uke's made my heart hurt like the writing is just that good those parts made me cry. this was a toss up between a 3 and a 4 and i couldnt decide so i added both tags lol and since it's technically a 3.5 i rounded it up and made it a total of 4 stars ps. s/ if it wasnt for the r*pe uke wouldve been perfect ugh

plot: 4 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5!!! seme: 5! chemistry: 5 skinship: 5 overall: holy shit i loved it. hunny with that adorable plot and pretty art and lovely characters??? PLEASE shes bound to be 5 stars FOR SURE. and goddamn that uke is hella pretty istg im always easily swayed by pretty ukes give me a break i deserve to see a pretty uke living their best happy gay life leave me alone hes literally the cutest!!!!! so lovely and super adorable i wanna cry and also that seme????? so nice and sweet and is also a bookworm? lord really said there aint nobody perfect but lemme try to create one,, AND MY GOD THE SKINSHIP IS JUST ,,,,,,,,,i literally almost combust not gonna lie i live for this shit this story is so lovely please i want more i need more i will literally cry

overall: a oneshot of Hotaru wa Ashita Shinu 10 years later bitch im sobbing im full on sobbinh i love this i really love this story it's quite rare for me to give a story's dj let alone a oneshot in general a full score of 5 stars it's just that good im a sucker for happy endings ok leave me alone !!!

11/25/21 ch 17 plot: 3 story: 2.5 art: 3.5-4 writing: 2.5 uke: 4.5 seme: 3-3.5 chemistry: 4 skinship: 4 overall: i would literally die for uke i adooooore him uGh anymore of that skinship will make me combust. uke and the skinship made this 4 stars for me. seme was aight i guess edit 03/29/22: ch 31 jesus christ seme is ew lol first of all cringey ass lines, secondly hes such an ass period edit 02/24/22: ch 40-42 these last three chapters really made a huge impact on the overall scoring bc... it really aint it. the art died and by that i mean it was so flat especially when it comes to showing emotions. story was obviously so rushed and writing almost did not make any sense. there were plot holes here and there that will never be answered and the writing really just fell off so theres basically no way of saving it anymore. she was 4 stars before but im deciding to drop it to 2.5/5. it's the best i can give despite the cute uke and skinship

plot: 4.5 story: 4.5 art: 5! writing: 4 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 2.5 overall: I LOVE IT. i kinda predicted this was gonna be 5 stars on the first chapter. she just has everything the cute plot the good flow the ART the UKE tHE SEME !!!!! she may be simple but i want more of her i beg i am literally on my knees i love her shes adorable as of 12/02/21 the tag "wholesome" was made

plot: 4 story: 4 art: 5 !!! writing: 3.5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 2.5 overall: the art. my god. shes gorgeous. the art made this 5 stars for sure. the story was light and it was a healthy progress of romance i really liked it i wish there was more edit 06/13/23 ch 7: GAGGGGGGG omg she gagged me fr ahah anw im happy this has a sequel!!! switched it back to "now reading" :-) pointers: ex-angel uke found by shoemaker seme on a bench one cold day and took him in :)