peaches's manga / #4/5(208)

05/01/22 ch 11 plot: 4 story: 3.5 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: the drama is killing me man i really dislike star-crossed lovers trope cuz that shit usually be hitting me in the gut with its writing and boy oh boy did this hit me big time. like i felt it— felt how strong the emotions the mc’s have for each other and how tragically forbidden they were. it’s only the 2nd season and although my emotions usually get the best of me with my scoring and that despite not liking how things are going on rn in the story bc, cough, it’s a bit on the sad tragic side, im still gonna give it a strong 4/5 cuz she deserves it

05/06/22 ch side 8 plot: 3.5 story: 3.5-4 art: 5 writing: 3.5 uke: 1? 1.5? seme: 2.5-4 ? chemistry: 4 skinship: 5 damn cuz seme gives a LOT of kisses overall: the insane amount of uke's "push-pull" made me wanna rip my hair out. the way he's so decisive about being indecisive is just batshit annoying to me like bro make up ur damn mind are u in it or not???? also (/s:) he quite literally ruined seme's life twice. TWICE. im not even exaggerating????? anw kinda disappointed with this bc the writing was kinda good but what disappointed me the most was it has a novel and obviously the writing there was way better compared to its webtoon. it basically didnt do its novel justice. uploader was kind enough to translate some excerpts of the novel to give the viewers more depth to some of the scenes that were adapted and lemme tell u there were parts of the novel that will sure as hell add a lot of sense to the story of this webtoon had it been included in it. like there were some good lines omitted??? also the word 'longing' was thrown A LOT of times in this and i just wanna say that their 'longing' wouldnt have happened in the first place if uke made up his damn mind and not waste so much time tf lol (/s) more things im disappointed at or had the ?????? reaction / more notes: - seme deserved better soooooo much better but what he said on the first part of side 7 was fucked up so i guess his karma was to be with uke lmfao - still dont and probably will never understand the huge attraction seme has for uke even after seeing his pov. maybe i just dont believe in love at first sight but cmon dude he ruined ur life TWICE jesus christ like stand tf up dude - uke had problems in life that lead him to be..uh, the person that he is today, sure but everyone has problems? idk i just dont see the part of him forcibly sending his ex-wife to a mental facility justifiable. i have so much more to complain abt him but it's literally pissing me off and i dont think it's healthy for me lol - will never understand uke's brain. literally ruined seme's life bc he thinks he's beautiful* ?????????????? like, what the Fuck? - i just dont like uke lol theres nothing to like hes the first ever uke i scored 1 yikes in conclusion their relationship is hella toxic ur honor i guess maybe they do deserve each other

plot: 2.5 story: 2.5-3 art: 5 writing: 2 uke: 5 seme: 3 chemistry: 4 skinship: 3-3.5 overall: i like it omg i adore the uke sm

05/14/22 ch 6 plot: 3-3.5 story: 3.5 art: 5 writing: 4.5 uke: 3 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 4.5 skinship: 4 overall: this hurt me omg writing just stabbed me in the stomach.. either that or my depression is just at its peak today lol but seriously it's good. disappointed with uke at first cuz (/s) he never really apologized for using seme for 10 years mind u! but u kno, he eventually came thru i guess. i want more of them tbh

05/21/22 ch 106 plot: 5 story: 4.5-5 art: 5! writing: 3.5-4 uke: 1-4 mans a range seme: horus i think? hes a 4 chemistry: 3.5 skinship: 5!!!!! (total skinship of everyone lol) overall: there are so many things i wanna say first of all (/s:) i am truly disgusted with the amount of times uke was violated here. and it's especially funny bc it happened a lot of times but the f word was still censored like lmfao???? make up ur damn mind? story is great it made me really interested in the egyptian mythology which for starters i knew nothing about until i started reading this. plot is strong and character buildup were all great so far. but the characters of these characters? honestly? disgusting. the only person i will protect with all my being is anubis and anubis only. the rest can choke. anw great story so far 4.5/5 woulda been 5 if not for the insane amount of r*pe

05/26/22 ch5.5 plot: 3 story: 3 art: 4.5 writing: 3 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2.5 overall: aaaa cutie. 3.5/5

06/03/22 ch 91 plot: 4 story: 4.5 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5 seme: 4-5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4.5 overall: she had a rocky start but eventually grew on me. story was pretty straightforward but really entertaining. uke was ADORABLE. seme too as the story progressed! i loved the extra characters too they added color to this story. tbh this was really close to a 5!!! i wanted more!!!!!

06/04/22 ch 6 plot: 3 story: 2.5-3 art: 4.5 writing: 2.5 uke: 4.5 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 3-3.5 skinship: 1 overall: cute short read. love the art on seme when he's on shinigami mode 3.5/5

06/06/22 ch 10 plot: 3.5 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 3.5-4 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: ugh i love it. shes cute shes simple shes almost a 5 fr she deserves it. i hope this gets more volumes cuz it's a good simple read