peaches's manga / #♡(11)

plot: 5 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 5 uke: 5 seme: 4.5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: SO FUCKING GOOD. SO. FUCKING. GOOD. i already know this is a 5 star story just by reading the first chapter ALONE. so fucking good. everything about it from characters to story to the writing!!! i was ugly crying at chapter 5 and not because i was sad but because it was so good it made me happy?!!! like how rare do i read something from here that i rated 5 stars that made me cry just because it was so good??????? more please I NEED MORE. it's so good it even made me read the author's note at the end for the first time. it's actually not even a 5, this is deadass a 100/5. what an amazing experience. (ps. as of 07/29/21 i have added two new tags: "♡" for favorites and "lovable uke")

plot: 4 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: im rating it based on how i remembered it. i just know that i LOVE THIS i love the story the characters ESPECIALLY the beautiful couple!!! i remember rereading this even before my rating system existed I JUST LOVE THIS i remember crying laughing then crying again. i dont trust my memory very much but this story stuck with me and hit emotionally. would definitely reread this again in the future edit 02/27/23 vol 5 ch 5: THATS MY GIRL!!!!!!!! THATS MY GIRL RIGHT THERE!!!!!!!!!!! 06/19/24 v6 ch 6: it ended happy tears

plot: 3/5 story: 3/5 art: 5/5 writing: 3/5 uke: 5/5 seme: 5/5 chemistry: 5/5 skinship: 5/5!!! overall: why are they so cute together im !!!!!!!! the skinship deadass made this 5 stars for me

× 2 stories × plot: 4, 3.5-4 story: 5, 4 art: 5 writing: 5! uke: 5, 4.5 seme: 5, 4.5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 3.5, 1 overall: "...i just want to be with you. it doesn't matter how short our time is. even just... until your feelings change. that's enough." the first story hit me HARD i knew this was a 5 star material on the first few chapters this author has a way with their writing fr i LOVE the writing sm it made my chest hurt multiple times and it took me a while to finish just a couple of chapters!!!!!! love this

plot: 4 story: 4.5 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4 overall: I LOVE THIS SOOOOOOO MUCH EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS IS GREAT I RLY LOVE THIS

plot: 3 story: 3 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 4.5 seme: 4 chemistry: 4 skinship: 2 overall: i think ive reread this three times? this was also the first ever bl i remember liking sm !!!!!

plot: 5 story: 5 art: 5 writing: 5 uke: 5 seme: 5 chemistry: 5 skinship: 4.5 overall: i dont think im in a good emotional and mental space rn to talk about how much this story actually wrecked me especially only after finishing it but i will try to get my thoughts straight. key word: try. this was an emotional masterpiece. at first i thought it was your typical omegaverse but then the story quickly moved on from the first couple (who i thought would be the main characters up until the end) to their butlers which then continued towards the end. i was a big ball of MESS. i wasnt holding onto a pillow while reading this. no, no. i was holding onto my tissue holder bc i kept crying every time a part in the story touches me. and it was what, every other page?! it could be the pms, sure, but if thats the case then every single person who claimed to cry while reading this all had pms at the same time and im pretty sure even god cant make that happen. im willing to wager my kidneys that god was one of its first readers and was so incredibly moved he shared it to his angel pals and theyve all been so emotionally wrecked that they neglected their duty of watching over the earth and now climate change is at its peak. /s: i could mention so many things that made me burst into tears like a newborn baby. a few of them would be miyauchi's childhood. when he lost his mom all he felt was guilt for thinking he was responsible for making his mom's life miserable. and that had he not been born she probably wouldnt end up in that situation. jesus christ. he was just. a. child. it hurt me so much that at the end when his past self appeared as if an intuition in helping to find ren's whereabouts i fucking lost it. that scene alone could be interpreted in different ways but i like to think that despite being finally happy and far from his past life, he still bring that version of himself with him always and that he will never forget that poor kid that shaped who he is now. another thing is miyauchi's huge appetite. i only thought of this at the end, but if you think about it it could possibly stem from his childhood when he was struggling so much in life with losing his mom. he looked so scarily thin it's obvious he was malnourished from the lack of food to eat. and now almost out of reflex he eat a lot bc he didnt have any when he was a kid. when i realized this i had to put my phone down because my eyes became so blurry that i couldnt read anything. miyauchi deserve all the happiness in this world. both him and kudou. kudou had a traumatic past as well but now he's found his solace and im very happy for him. he's the perfect person for miyauchi. he made me cry so much too. every time he got emotional about something and cries, i cry too. when he cried about being so fond of his baby, i cried too. when he cried all those times about miyauchi, i cried too. at the end when he cried as he hugged miyauchi's pregnant belly, i cried. so hard. i cant believe i typed so much sappy shit i literally wrote a whole fuckinh essay at 4am god help me i need to sleep i also need professional help whichever comes first ,, it's just..this story is an emotional roller-coaster ride fr. this story is a definite chef's kiss and the chef is definitely a michelin star chef. shes got everything ur honor shes got the beautiful story and well-written characters and not only that, she also has a happy ending. always remember to treat ur uke right bc happy uke, happy life

plot: 4 story: 4 art: 5 writing: 4 uke: 5!!! seme: 5! chemistry: 5 skinship: 5 overall: holy shit i loved it. hunny with that adorable plot and pretty art and lovely characters??? PLEASE shes bound to be 5 stars FOR SURE. and goddamn that uke is hella pretty istg im always easily swayed by pretty ukes give me a break i deserve to see a pretty uke living their best happy gay life leave me alone hes literally the cutest!!!!! so lovely and super adorable i wanna cry and also that seme????? so nice and sweet and is also a bookworm? lord really said there aint nobody perfect but lemme try to create one,, AND MY GOD THE SKINSHIP IS JUST ,,,,,,,,,i literally almost combust not gonna lie i live for this shit this story is so lovely please i want more i need more i will literally cry

overall: a oneshot of Hotaru wa Ashita Shinu 10 years later bitch im sobbing im full on sobbinh i love this i really love this story it's quite rare for me to give a story's dj let alone a oneshot in general a full score of 5 stars it's just that good im a sucker for happy endings ok leave me alone !!!

plot: 4/5 story: 4/5 art: 5/5 writing: 3.5/5 uke: 5/5 seme: 5/5 chemistry: 5/5 skinship: 5/5 overall: beautiful uke !!!!!! one of the prettiest ukes in existence and i say this with confidence!!!!!!! beautiful art GOOD story and GREAT COUPLE oh my gOD they make me wanna kms for being single and that says a lot about how adorable they are