Completed at ch 70, another one of those stories that started off good only to get terrible halfway through. I seriously had to push myself to finish all the way to the end bc the FL’s thought process is so stupid and all the conflicts give me sooo much whiplash. FL couldn’t put two and two together when she kept seeing Arina in her dream, like couldn’t she at least suspect they were related somehow seeing as Arina looked identical to her?? Like cmon even the evil Duke found out about that before she did, and she could literally see dreams from her mother Arina. Like so stupid, and they fact she got burned/poisoned not once but twice by the evil Duke bc she’s so just oblivious, like who willing accepts a gift from someone who you know wants to kill you without any sense of caution…and then she didn’t even hide the burn she got from it, like that’s basically telling everyone that’s you’re a witch with that burn. Literally one braincell, and they way she goes to the Duke’s lab without a plan to fight and instead easily gets drugged by the litumium stones. Like girlie whqt did you expect walking into enemy territory?? If anything the villain was much smarter than the leads. Bro the ML even showed up at the lab without any guards and was surprised the Duke had so many guards protecting the lab…again what did you already expect??? If anything when the other witches showed up for the ending battle I wanted to see them in action, only for the story to completely cut them out after. Bruh. And if we’re talking about cutting ppl out, poor Gretal got barely any screen time after the time skip and the kids grew up. If anything poor girl was just a side character after. And tbh usually I try my best not to mind age gap relationships when there’s been a gap in time and the leads Rencounter as adults but it just made me so uncomfortable how the FL keeps reminding us that Hansel was such a cute kid and now she’s in love with him. Like even as she was confessing her feelings to him, she thought wow he was such a cute kid and now he’s a handsome man…why would you even think about that now? So weird and gives off so many pedo vibes. If anything I found the leads story sooo mf boring, I’d much rather see Arina’s story and see how she gets revenge on her lover for using her. She seems much more of a badass bitch…or actually maybe I would just be annoyed of how this bad bitch keep running after this stupid loser who used her. Coz not in remembering she still clung to him even after everything so. Yea actually there was no character I really liked that much in this story. Overall this story was a flop. Pulled me in with a strong beginning and good premise just for it to suck. Shame fr.
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