lilithespark's manga / #ats(1212)

60 The beginning is pretty bland, but it gets sm better! I like the direction rhe story is heading, and the slow burn is perfect. I think you should treat this story pretty lightheartedly with its themes of family and healing, etc.

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7 Idk I feel like the writing is a bit clunky so far but I do wanna read more!

4 Idk im not rly feeling it

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15 This is interesting! I’ve been waiting for someone to actually go into full depth and how someone would likely feel after being ripped from their home and away from their family into a totally foreign world! I want moreee

16 pretty interesting? the premise is relatively different, and i like where this is going..

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56 The world building is so intricate and interesting! It doesn’t feel one dimensional because it’s not just zombies that are the problem but a corrupt government. It’s also interesting how the MC and the ML seem to have aligned themselves with different beliefs, which adds another layer of tension.