veehaw's manga / #Weird(3)

the first story was intriguing (wasn’t a fan of the rape tho… also the age difference is a little weird) but i LOVED the flower story!!! update (11/5/23): i keep coming back to the flower story, i love it so much. i love how its said that they liked each other before the events of the story began (which slayyyy for yearning and not actually unrequited love) and with that it kind of eliminates the “straight man turned gay” trope from this story. also the form god takes on when they talk to miki and hana gives those characters so much depth! its such a small part of the story but it lets the reader figure out a lot of things about miki and hana. (also this was the tiniest detail but i loved how asada nemui remembered to draw the grandmas wedding band on ugh it made her feel like an actual human). i genuinely wish we couldve gotten a look of them as an actual couple but thats my only complaint about this story

as another commenter said, im really not a huge fan of the manipulation at the beginning, but i did really like it by the end. im glad theyre together and hopefully live on together. i honestly wanna see more but thats super unlikely. also the lead is a straight dude and they wrote him so accurately that he gave me the ick a few times like hes so straight omg . but im really happy with how it ended and also i cried at the old dudes death chapter. really really happy theyre happy together now tho.

starts with rape… also mustache man is really weird. and the development of the feelings is not thorough.. cute story tho. i lovee the extra i think its adorable