SaltySugar's manga / #1-star(26)

Chapter 30 - Complete 9/10/22 I skip the all the extra since it was manly the side couple. I had to finish the main story out of obligation. I have to give this story a 1 star since I didn't understand it what-so-ever. The story could have been interesting but the pacing and story telling is just off. There was point in the story where I just felt that the author forgot that they have include it in the story. An example is when the uke was thinking amount his childhood friend and their name. The seme had to tell the uke that they had the same name. Like omg, the seme introduce himself when they meet, they are currently partner and had sex. How could you not remember the dude name. It just feel like the author lack the skill to produce a cohensive story at the moment.

Chapter 6 - complete 9/21/22 (1 star) I don't hate it, but I don't love it. The story is a 2-3 out of 10. The dude raise the kid of his unrequire love. The kid end up lusting after the adoptive dad.

10 - latest chapter 9/23/21 There seem to be a storyline, but like most x-rated move, the story-line is barely there. It just seem like pwp story enjoyment = 2

Chapter 32 + extra 4 - 10/31/22 Pro I like the masculine/muscular uke con It pwp.

chapter 22 - 8/18/23 I was good at the beginning, but started to drag after MC temporary turn back into human. I had high hopes for this due to the review and rating, but their relationship it a drag. It follow the miscommunication trope were both likes it each, but one doesn't express his feeling. Eden rejected MC love confession despite him liking MC, and MC keep thinking about it. It so annoying

Little to no plot