Onigiri08's manga / #comedy(6)

The dynamic of each character is amazing...the ukes in this story are sooo freaking cool and mature!!! but sometimes I feel like the author left things out that should have been incorporated to create more depth for each point of the story. She even forgot and left out the fourth friend until the purple haired guy went to the hospital after being shot? Ch 62 was so unclear. Sex scenes every now and again instead of showing just the beginning and ending of the story I think would have emphasized even more how sweet the blood is and how intoxicating it is. Visual emphasis in expressions and reactions were tad lacking as well as substance to emphasize that “oh fuck they’re vamps”. I really really like how she spun what it meant to be turned into a vampire. How not just any blood will do, that vampires actually love humans a lot, that they can alter their appearances in order make themselves seem human and survive among humans. Also, the author’s sense of style and pattern + color combinations for character clothing as well as location design is *chef kiss* tres bien

I think there could be a variety of ways to explain the situation to the readers instead of it all being a conversation between the two characters every time...as well as more variety in the setting of the dungeons. It could be really pretty caves with a lot of imbedded gem stones, mysterious yet beautiful plants that could be used as ingredients for rare potions, underground waterfalls that have healing properties and can store in a bottle, making friends with animals that could either be just a cute fluffy pet or a fierce familiar that aids in battle. There’s so much opportunity for world creation that the author missed out on and it’s a shame. Despite the lack of creativity, I love the main lead’s seemingly reckless attitude yet having a sound head on his shoulders. It’s really funny getting the healer all riled up because of his actions. Though if it were me I’d just be smiling and really having fun with his can do overpowered attitude.

this is so damn precious T.T I thought it was gonna be cheesy and over exaggerated and filled with a whole bunch of dumb decisions with 2d characters...but damn as the story goes, you find out more depth in each one. and the comments they make are actually funny. easily one of my favorite discoveries <3

practical realistic adult paired with an energetic, cute, and sincere youngster. The jock guy didn't even get a chance with the MC and realized his feelings too late. T.T I Wish the artist did more to emphasize moments that would leave the MC weak in the knees just because Luke whispered something in his ears. Also, they just got into it but using sex toys in their sex lives....it would have also been cute if the blonde due forced the two together in order to extract reviews on the toys lmao.