imcrazybutimfree's manga / #smut(127)

There are theories in the comments saying that the blonde guy was probably a substitute for the younger brother and I think it kinda makes sense, but I’m not sure about the blonde guy being aware of it or not. He likely chased the uke away because of jealousy, but this jealous might have been caused by both awareness of being his substitute or annoyance due to the important presence of the uke in the seme’s life at that time. I’m pretty certain that the seme had developed deep feelings for the uke in the past, but what makes this story so interesting is that the seme’s feelings are closer to an obsessive brotherly attachment that eventually developed into an equally obsessive romantic and sexual love than actual healthy romantic love. In fact an important difference exists between loving someone and not being able to live without them. I wish it was longer,

To me this manhwa is perfection, it has it all. The plot is really great h va use of the plot twists in it: like… the “idiot” game addicted MC actually turning out being an undercover cop was an unexpected twist and the revelation moment when all those policemen barged in to arrest that shitty man who tried to rape our blondie cutie pie other MC was SO COOL. CAN WE ALSO PLEASE TALK ABOUT HOW THE UKE IS THE BIG-BUILT GUY? AND WE CAN WE ALSO HIGHLIGHT THE FACT THAT THEY FUCKING SWITCH AND FUCK EACH OTHER? I’M LIVING FOR IT!!! Healthy relationship born in odd circumstances. A few misunderstandings but not heavy angst. Supportive side character, and above all… A CUTE LIL BABY IN THE END

The last part about Euchan’s dreams felt a little bit forced, like the author was trying to recover the supernatural and folkloristic element, but it didn’t really make sense. The main breakup happened because of misunderstanding and created dynamic which are very common in immature people, while the breakup in the epilogue was 100% understandable: they were experiencing a major transition from school life to being part of the workforce, with all the stress of trying to find a job when there are no guarantees anybody wants you; they went from a shared context of school life with a decent amount of free time to having little in common very suddenly as their work paths diverged; consequently, they didn’t have the energy to try and maintain a relationship and needed to prioritize other aspects of their lives. Once they both settled into their new realities and were able to re-find their work-life balance, they were able to talk it out and reconcile things. Their puppy love matured a bit. Their breakup was no longer the end of the world, they were no longer the types to claim eternity, they no longer couldn’t keep their hands off each other or missed each other whenever they went a day without seeing each other. They became quieter in how they expressed their affection. Their love didn’t extinguish, but changed. A journey of a childish teenage love’s transformation through the difficult path of adulthood towards a more mature love.

FRIGGIN’ HOT! The main couple sex scenes were dope.

I still don’t know if my vote is just and fair or too low for such a particular story. The author managed to escape commonplaces and stereotypes crafting an original story. It was a little bit confusing tho, some scenes were chained to one another through association of ideas, while other links seemed to be completely unrelated. The plot is clear though, but I would have liked some important development on the crowned prince and his physician’s side and on noah himself. Talking about Noah enneagram he’s probably a 6w7, seeking security and fucking around to avoid pain, using his nature as a witch as an excuse to mask his feelings. Even his low self esteem to be born a male is probably an excuse he uses to keep running away in the belief he doesn’t deserve anyone’s love, but he still desires someone to love him unconditionally. And this is where Ryan enters the picture: what about their first encounter? The same scene was shown through all the possible angles and povs but the author didn’t give us the whole picture. Of course the scheme of their meeting is pretty clear: Ryan gets lost, he meets the witches, since he’s a kid they spare him, he gets to know Noah but almost forgets about him since he also forgot about the other witches thanks to a potion. I felt like the whole encounter was labelled as something happening due to “fate”, just like the kid witch’s prophecy about them dying in the castle, which also felt like an irrelevant element used only to make the reader anxious. Overall, amazing plot and characters with not so good development and organising.