Bloodpix's manga / #Fantasy(103)

I'm still mad that it's technically stockholm. He legit kidnapped the kid and made him cry for financial gain and then it became real feelings. Like, hate to say it, but this isn't the happy little story it's trying to paint past that point!!

It had really good pacing and there was still plenty of content they could've added : where are the three remaining elders, why did they get married after she just said they shouldn't to maintain both the households, what happens now that they are married, nothing really occurred with Ale he was just kinda there. But the main issue I have was it was so nicely paced and then the last like 5 chapters? GUTTED. Everything happened all at once - confessions, overthrowing, revenge, heartbreak, romance, revenge 2.0, passed out - RESOLVED - MARRIED?!?! What the fuck just happene!? And most of that all occurred in the final FINAL chapter! It's bonkers!! Why do that?! It was fine, kinda boring read TBH but it was fine. Then it hit that balls to the walls ending that just crammed legit everything in to the last chapter and it was too much. Too many streets left open too many doors not locked properly idfk it's just rushed and bad.

Already thrilling, what strong female lead while not force feeding you the reincarnation!

Gods I called all the tropes from the get go - cute love interest turns out to by a troubled bad guy who makes things worse, side lover/relief/support is killed by said love interest, and main character goes through torture arc trying to fix whatever they can. First 3 chapters I called it to a near T. Just because my prediction is spot on doesn't mean I'm not enjoying it though! Perhaps it could garner my attention more but as it is it's perfectly fine, a fun magical girl trope that did genuinely kink my plotline as it took me by surprise, and honestly the arts great and the transformations and smut are mwah- magnifique.

Cute, super rushed. Kinda wish there was more to it but eh it was still pleasant.

I was bored out of my mind. I read all the available chapters (11) and I just was at the point at like chapter 5 where I just grabbed the scroll bar and dragged. I skimmed like I was playing a timed guessing game and it's so monotonous and boring. Not dissing on the translators here either but the broken English kind of pulls away from the already uninteresting characters. Don't bother with this one unless you're a completionist. UPDATE - Grand news. A official translation came through and my opinion did not change at all. I only got to perhaps chapter 16 despite there being over 40 now and I couldn't bear it anymore and stopped. The story throws isekai elements in at random when necessary, the characters moods are that Katy Perry song to a italicized T where they flip flop non stop to get where they need to, and I sincerely can't even force myself to enjoy the story. I apologize for my rude and upfront opinion but I won't cherry coat this. To those who enjoy this, that's wonderful. I can't be that person though, so enjoy it in my place.

I was ready to give this a 3 star but then they crammed a very information heavy ending into 1-2 chapters and I'm pissed. The pacing has been fine, the mystery was good, and everyones a dumbass in their own rightful way. Then you give me that (SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS) "Oh I was that person and her soul went into my body then I reincarnated back here as her reincarnated! Who'd of thunk!" and the male lead who should literally remember none of that for ANY reason remembers it too, la-de-da everything goes peaceful, all the friends not friends she made along the way wishes her well, they're married at the end and share their first kiss in the 83 fucking chapters *I'm LIVID.* It's not like they'd gone over limit it really was, ham fisted "It's done, end it now." ending FFS. And you mean to tell me that he didn't realize it was her? ARE YOU AN IDIOT?! They look the same, just their colors swapped!! Hell even I presumed she was a reincarnation but I'm just MIFFED. (ALL DONE ALL DONE) The buildup and progression of the story is fine. You get a bit invested with these characters as long as you get past their vacant doll faces with hard to do expressions. Seriously they're so flat. They obviously slip into the typical tropes but hey originality is hard these days. I can't say I'd recommend this to anyone, unfortunately. I read the whole thing but sincerely it had me feeling nice right up until that rushed ending. Now I'm left with disappointment that they did me dirty like this, at the end of all things.

Most of the characters are pretty token examples and currently it's just a revenge story with a bunch of reverse harem potential eye candy. EDIT 2/27: While things have gotten better now that she is out of the palace *I despise that prince and the way they handled that relationship exceptionally so. Which likely means it's well written but it was just so unnecessarily toxic of two overtly proud and unconversing individuals.* Pope guy is good, secret guard guy is a homie, brother is true bro, can't wait to meet mom and dad, and I hope the bitch that lied her way into the palace is regretting getting stuck with that guy. LET ALFREDO RULE, THE SAUCY CHAP!! New Flash - Alfredo has literally been MIA for the last, like, 30 chapters. I feel slighted.

Top tier. I thought the man was getting a lil dragon out that shadow but NO A BEEFIER MAN WITH SO MANY DEPRESSING ISSUES STEPPED OUT AND I WANT TO CODDLE HIM AND SWADDLE HIM AND GIVE HIM THE BEST COOKIES AND WATCH ALL OF HARRY POTTER AND LORD OF THE RINGS BACK TO BACK WHILE HE CRIES AND I PAT HIM GOOD CAUSE HE BEST BOY FUCK THE NAY SAYERS!! No, all seriousness, this is really good narrative. I feel like they could have extended the time and built up some more of their roommate narrative but I know they've probably got a lot to cram in to this and perhaps a chapter limit (but that's just a theory!) so I'm hoping we get more good times. Very few times do we get some good smut with good story. They've gone beyond to set the stage and I am enthralled to see more!